First notebook entry: Introducing myself

你们好，我叫Hybrid。 我是因果人。 我喜欢学中文。我喜欢看中国和台湾电视。可是我的中文不好。今天我写中文assignment。这是很难 可是我喜欢学中文。谢谢。

再见。

你们好，我叫Hybrid。我是英国人。 我喜欢中文，我喜欢看中国内地和台湾的电视剧、电影。可是我的中文不好。我觉得今天的中文作业很难，但是没有打击我学习中文的兴趣，反而更激进了我学习的心态，虽然学习中文很难，可是我依然喜欢中文。谢谢。 再见。

First notebook entry: Introducing myself （我根据您的意思修改了一下~）

大家好！我叫Hybrid，来自英国。我喜欢学习中文，看中国电视剧(TV programme)，只不过我的中文现在还不太(so)好。今天我试着写了一篇中文报告（assignment），感觉难度很大，但是（but）我仍然（still）不会放弃（give up）学习中文，因为我热爱（love）它！谢谢。

hello, actually i could clearly understand what your meaning and as a chinese, i am glad to see foreigners loving and learning chinese. my corrections just mean to help your expression sound more natural. here are some suggetions,

we could combine two short sentences if they have the same subject to keep it short and succint. such as，我叫hybrid。我是英国人。could be changed into one sentence：我叫hybrid，来自（come from）英国。 these two kinds of expression have exact the same meaning but the second one may sound better to us native speakers

i could understand that you want to be polite by saying 'bye' at the end, however, when you are delivering a self-introduction, you don't need to say that. it is a little strange.the reason is that in our logic, if you say goodbye here, we may wonder if this means that you don't want to interact or let us know more about you. so just delete it.

actually, there are many differences between chinese and english, so i know that learning chinese is really difficult. maybe what you need is just more practise and accumulation as well as a language environment. i believe you can make progress soon. the more you learn, the deeper your love in chinese will be ~

hope these could help :)

i am still a english learner and i am studying at university of nottingham,  i hope my comments make sense to you. any question, pls feel free to ask~

best.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

你们好，我叫Hybrid。 我是因果人英国人。 我喜欢学中文。我喜欢看中国和台湾的电视。可是我的中文不好。今天我写中文assignment。这是很难 可是我喜欢学中文。谢谢。

再见。

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

你们好，我叫Hybrid。 我是因果(英国)人。 我喜欢学中文。我喜欢看中国和台湾电视。可是我的中文不好。今天我写中文assignment（Here can use the word --"作业"。“作业” is homework.）。这是(here need use the word -- "可是","可是" is "but"."可是很难"="But it's difficult." “这是”is "this". If you want to say: "This is difficult", you can say:"这很难"。Chinese never say:"这是很难。")很难( here need use","or".", both right. “这很难”can be a part of sentence or be a sentence.) 可是我喜欢学中文。谢谢。

再见。

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你们好，我叫Hybird。我是英国人。我喜欢中文。我喜欢看中国和台湾电视。可是我的中文不好。今天我写中文作业。可是（这）很难。（，）可是我喜欢学中文。谢谢。

再见。

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PS：Taiwan is a part of Chinese. This subject is sensitivity content ... 

“中国和台湾”signify they are belong different country. 

If you want to say “中国和台湾”-- ^_^ ，you can say:"大陆和台湾"。"大陆和台湾" signify they are have one country.

Just have only one “中国”。

Of couse , too many people unkown this, 

these corrections are just my preferences. not necessarily wrong. just want it to be more natural.

你们好 -> 大家好 ( 你們好 sounds like you are actually talking with a group of people.)

我喜欢学中文。我喜欢看中国和台湾电视。-> 我喜歡學中文，喜歡看中國大陸和台灣的電視節目。( ① if it's all about 喜歡, one 我 is enough. ②看電視 means watching TV, but 看中國的電視 means staring at the machines. ③if you don't care about politics, you can say 大陸和台灣 which means mainland China and Taiwan. so there wont be troubles.)

可是我的中文不好->但我的中文還不夠好

今天我写中文assignment->今天我要寫一篇中文的assignment。

这是很难，可是我喜欢学中文->這對我來說挺難的，但誰讓我喜歡學中文呢。(sorry can't help it)

大家好，我叫Hybrid。我是英國人。我喜歡學中文，喜歡看台灣和中國大陸的電視節目。但我的中文還不夠好。今天我要寫一篇中文的assignment。這對我來說挺難的，但誰讓我喜歡學中文呢。