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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am a college student from Guangzhou. I <strike>am </strike><strike>major</strike> (majoring) in software engineering. In my spare time, I like to play computer games and read novels. <strike>Recently, </strike>(Right now,) I am reading Harry Potter and the <strike>oder of the phoenix</strike>.(Order of the Phoenix). I want to learning english because I <strike>thik </strike>(think) that english (English) is <strike>a</strike> (an) important way to communicate. <strike>Besides</strike>(Furthermore), I want to get a good <strike>piont</strike> (score)<strike> in the exam and pass the Band Four Test. </strike>(on the Band Four Test!) Finally ,I also want to meet some new friends<strike> in</strike> (on) the <strike>Internet</strike>. (internet) Thanks.


    你写的英文不错！
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    Today,I <strike>have</strike> learned how to swim.

    Before today, I w啊s afraid of swimming. Everytime when I was in the swimming pool, I couldn't breathe and <strike>had a feeling of  </strike> (felt as if I was) drowning. My classmates told me I must learn how to swim<strike> in case an accident.</strike> (in case of an accident would occur). Fortunately ,there was a swimming course in our school during summer.The teacher <strike>showed</strike> (taught) us how to swim and I <strike>had </strike>overcame my fear. Finally,I can swim for 3 meters. It's real<strike>ly a large advance </strike> (improvement)for me.O(∩_∩)O~


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    I want <strike>to have </strike>a camera!

    i <strike>had made m</strike><strike>y determination</strike> (determined) to buy it and <strike>take down  </strike> (capture) my life.

    As time goes by, 20years has gone. the memory just in my mind,
    but when i become forgetable,how can i save the beautiful things?
    Twenty years has passed by, and even though the memories are still in my mind, when I am older- how can I save these precious memories?

    <strike>now,</strike><strike> i</strike> (Always captial I when used as a pronoun) will save my money <strike>from now on</strike>,and try my best to get a part-time job.
    camera is waitting for me!~
    From now on, I will try my best to get a part-time job and save my money! The camera is calling for me!
    加油！

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself 你好！ 我叫黄世森。 我想跟一个同学练习说， 写中文。 我可以帮他练习英文！我是大学生学中文。 我想去中国下夏。
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