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Today,I have learned how to swim. Before today,I was afraid of swimming.Everytime when I was in the swimming pool,I couldn't breathe and had a feeling of drowning.My classmates told me I must learn how to swim in case an accident.Fortunately,there was a swimming course in our school during summer.The teacher showed us how to swim and I had overcame my fear.Finally,I can swim for 3 meters.It's really a large advance for me.O(∩_∩)O~

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Today,I have learned how to swim.

Before today, I w啊s afraid of swimming. Everytime when I was in the swimming pool, I couldn't breathe and had a feeling of   (felt as if I was) drowning. My classmates told me I must learn how to swim in case an accident. (in case of an accident would occur). Fortunately ,there was a swimming course in our school during summer.The teacher showed (taught) us how to swim and I had overcame my fear. Finally,I can swim for 3 meters. It's really a large advance  (improvement)for me.O(∩_∩)O~


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Today, I have learned how to swim.

Before today,  I was afraid of swimming. Everytime when I was in the swimming pool, I couldn't breathe and had a feeling of drowning. My classmates told me I must learn how to swim in case of an accident. Fortunately,there was a swimming course in our school during summer. The teacher showed us how to swim and I had overcome my fear .Finally, I can swim for 3 meters. It's really a large advance improvement for me.O(∩_∩)O~

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