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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a college student from Guangzhou.I am major in software engineering.In my spare time,I like to play computer games and read novels.Recently,I am reading Harry Potter and the oder of the phoenix.I want to learning english because I thik that english is a important way to communicate.Besides,I want to get a good piont in the exam and pass the Band Four Test.Finally,I also want to meet some new friends in the Internet.Thanks.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a college student from Guangzhou.I am majoring  in software engineering.  In my spare time, I like to play computer games and read novels. Recently, I am reading Harry Potter's and , "The Order of the Phoenix" .I want to learning English because I think that english it is an important way to  communicateion tool. Besides I want to get a good piont  point grade in the my exams and pass the Band Four Test. Finally I also want to meet some new friends in on the Internet. Thanks.

Other than you punctuation and capitalization mistakes, your English is pretty good.  Read my essay on tips on learning the technical aspects of the language and standard indentation.  It is very important to know the mechanics of the language, otherwise even with perfect grammar and spelling, your writing will be perceived as sloppy and uneducated.  I am a software engineer as well.  Into compilers and API specification and implementation.  Hope to learn technical Chinese from you even though my interests leans more onto Classical and Cantonese settings. :)

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Another%20Observation%20-%20Using%20Punctuation%20Marks%20Wrongly%20Or%20Just%20Laziness.htm
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a college student from Guangzhou. I am major (majoring) in software engineering. In my spare time, I like to play computer games and read novels. Recently, (Right now,) I am reading Harry Potter and the oder of the phoenix.(Order of the Phoenix). I want to learning english because I thik (think) that english (English) is a (an) important way to communicate. Besides(Furthermore), I want to get a good piont (score) in the exam and pass the Band Four Test. (on the Band Four Test!) Finally ,I also want to meet some new friends in (on) the Internet. (internet) Thanks.


你写的英文不错！

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