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- Information about Chinese celebrities Hello, can someone recommend good websites for finding information about Chinese celebrities and which ones are traveling to the USA? I am interning for an international travel magazine and they are interested in contacting Chinese celebrities. I told the magazine that I already know about Chinese-American and Asian-American celebrities but they are not interested in any of them. They want to know about Chinese celebrities who are not "American". I can read and type only a minimal amount of Chinese (traditional & simplified) and I have not been keeping up with Chinese pop culture, so any help would be greatly appreciated.March 4, 201560
The holiday is coming!
I'm so happy that I have finished all my exams. This means that my vacation(or break) has begun! I can do anything I want because I have all the time in the world now! oh yeah !!~~~~~~
(it is better to use the general terms 'vacation' or 'break' because the term 'holiday' is usually reserved for religiously or legally mandated breaks)
forgot to write in my other entry that all blue words are optional corrections and red words are necessary ones
0 votedJuly 11, 20110Examination
I have an exam tomorrow, and it seems as if I know nothing about the subject. I am so worried, I don't want to fail. I have been reviewing the course all day. It's so tedious! And I think I will be reviewing the course again all tonight. (or "I will be going over the course again, burning the midnight oil" i stayed with the 'ing' conjugation to keep this paragraph fluid)God!
(or "I had to review the course all day ... I think I will review the course again and burn the midnight oil")
I hope that I will have enough time to study English after the exam. And I also hope that somebody will be able to help me. (we usually use 'exam' instead of 'examination')0 votedJuly 11, 20111When love is gone.
I never wanted to speak about my love for you. If just you and I understood it, then it did not matter if anyone else knew.
Our relationship was doomed. (you do not explain why it was doomed in this paragraph, in fact, you write all about how it was Not doomed and was a Great relationship. so this sentence confuses the reader because of its inconsistency. It would be better if you kept this paragraph positive and then wrote negative stuff in other paragraphs.)It occured during a part of my life when destiny opened a door and put you before my eyes. We were chose by fate, and after a bittersweet romance, we let each other go.
I did not see my love as impulsive. Many valuable traits of yours deeply moved me; and even though I saw your flaws, I never emphasized of them.
But something happened, and the problems it caused tired me out and drove me crazy in the process.
I know that this story has to be written out in its entirety!
If you are to be with me, you will just suffer. I believe that someone else will provide the happiness that you are looking for. He is more capable of protecting you and taking care of you. So leave and do not turn your face back towards me, your mercy will just hurt my pride. Leave, as I will watch the you.
The our moments together were so sweet, that I continue to recall them throughout my life. I think they are the times I cherish the most, do you also think the same way?I think that people have not corrected your entry because. It is very hard to correct emotional outbursts that are trying for a poetic affect because no one but you understands how you are feeling and any change another person makes to your writing, will also change the feelings that you are trying to express. I am familiar with poetry and it often contains fragments of thoughts and feelings that make absolultely no sense whatsoever. And only the writer understands the true meaning to his outburst. These fragments can not be corrected because they were intended to be expressed in an unconventional manner.
If you want people to correct your work you must write something that people are able to correct. Prose, short stories, simple diary entries and so on.
0 votedJuly 6, 20111- una pelota llena con agua los nubes estan meando and no quiero que salir la casa. Pero pienso que ellos han perdido sus bocas y no pueded beber mas agua del aire pues van a desintegrarse a nada. Porque el sol esta muy fuerte y habia secando todo. los flores que marchitaba con miedo de el ahora celebran a bajo de la lluvia.Los animales estan ocultando en sus madrigueras porque no quieren que mojarse. Pero una ardilla esta a fuera bebiendo la lluvia, bebe mucho a mucho y poco a poco su estomago crece. Que grande y redonda parece el! Como una peluda pelota que tiene una cabeza chiquita, does piernas y dos brazos tan chiquitos, y una ardilla mojada. Cuando la lluvia pasa, los nubes se desintagra tambien, y la ardilla quiere que regressa a su madriguera para escapar al sol. Pero ella esta demasiada gorda y no puede que caminar. "¡Ayudame! Ayudame!" dijo ella, pero sus companeros dicen "Hace demasiado calor y no pueden salir mis madrigueras for ayudarte." Ella esta enojada y se queja "No estan mis amigos?" y ellos responden "Si, pero ahora su situacion es su problema." Ella no se como contestar por eso pensar para idea para convencer ellos. El sol seca mucho a mucho y después, no hay agua en ningun lugar. Los animales tiene mucho sed y pregunta a ella "Si tienes agua que podemos beber?" y ella responde "¡Claro que si!" y ellos dicen "Por eso vamos a ayudarte.", que feliz esta ella cuando dice "Muchas gracias. Estoy en deuda con ustedes." Ellos salen sus madrigueras y con mucha fuerza, mueven ella hasta su madriguera. "Donde esta la agua?" ellos preguntan a la ardilla, y ella dice "a ... un momento por favor. Pienso que voy a mear dentro de poco." y ellos gritan "Mear!! Que groso! No queremos que beber su pis!" ellos quejan, y ella reponde "Pero no se como sale el agua en otra manera.". Ellos no saben tambien, y piensan "El agua esta en dentro de tu and estas llenasima como una pelota ..... A si nos traspasaron su piel, el agua puede sale." cuando ella oye esto, se grita "No! No! Por favor no apuñalarme! Es mala cosa para mi cuerpo!" Y ellos responden "Te ayudan para agregar agua y el agua esta en dentro de tu. Sabes otra manera para el agua sale?" Ella grita mas "No, pero no me apuñalarme por favor! Es malo!" pero ellos no entienden y usa un palo afilado para perforar ella. Ella exuda mucho sangre pero nada agua, y su sangre llena toda la madriguera. Los animales escapan y regresan sus casas. "¡Que tonto estabamos! No vamos a ayudar otros tontos!"June 28, 201120
