sorry about all the reposting, my computer was being weird.

Rainy day A Rainy Day,and nothing to do and seat before my laptop,see some one online,but i can not see anywords to them,for i just a China girl I know the language is so import for me,so i need to learn with my all life Yes,i must to do that Maybe we can change my life And i always remember a suggestion:Knowledge can change one life. I really want go to "Big apple"in future. A rainy day, with nothing to do but sit in front of my laptop, waiting to see someone online. But I can not say any words to them, for I am just a Chinese girl. ('China girl' can be used as an insult, so I suggest that you not use that phrase. Friends may call each other that for fun, just as they may call each other by many different insulting words. But that is amongst friends and not to strangers. ) I know that learning English is very important to me, so I need to study as much as I can. (I changed "the language" to English so that the subject is more clear because "the language" can be any language. What Shawn wrote: "with all my energy" is correct, the phrase I changed it to "I need to study as much as I can" is just a more concrete expressian ie less figurative. Because "studying" is an action" whereas "learning" is something abstract that just happens all the time, because you can learn things all the time without "studying". An example would be: If you don't know how to do something, and a person is just nice and shows you how. Then you just learned how to do the action without studying anythying. ) It is something I must do. (I just changed this to sound more 'formal'. you can say "Yes, I must do that" but it sounds like you are talking to yourself, instead of to another person, when you say it that way.) Mabey it can change my life. (is 'it' refering to the learning of English? you can keep it as "we" if you are perhaps refering to people, or some other plural subject) I am always thinking about this saying: Knowledge can change one's life. (I changed the verb becau

Rainy day A Rainy Day,and nothing to do and seat before my laptop,see some one online,but i can not see anywords to them,for i just a China girl I know the language is so import for me,so i need to learn with my all life Yes,i must to do that Maybe we can change my life And i always remember a suggestion:Knowledge can change one life. I really want go to "Big apple"in future. A rainy day, with nothing to do but sit in front of my laptop, waiting to see someone online. But I can not say any words to them, for I am just a Chinese girl. ('China girl' can be used as an insult, so I suggest that you not use that phrase. Friends may call each other that for fun, just as they may call each other by many different insulting words. But that is amongst friends and not to strangers. ) I know that learning English is very important to me, so I need to study as much as I can. (I changed "the language" to English so that the subject is more clear because "the language" can be any language. What Shawn wrote: "with all my energy" is correct, the phrase I changed it to "I need to study as much as I can" is just a more concrete expressian ie less figurative. Because "studying" is an action" whereas "learning" is something abstract that just happens all the time, because you can learn things all the time without "studying". An example would be: If you don't know how to do something, and a person is just nice and shows you how. Then you just learned how to do the action without studying anythying. ) It is something I must do. (I just changed this to sound more 'formal'. you can say "Yes, I must do that" but it sounds like you are talking to yourself, instead of to another person, when you say it that way.) Mabey it can change my life. (is 'it' refering to the learning of English? you can keep it as "we" if you are perhaps refering to people, or some other plural subject) I am always thinking about this saying: Knowledge can change one's life. (I changed the verb becau

Rainy day A Rainy Day,and nothing to do and seat before my laptop,see some one online,but i can not see anywords to them,for i just a China girl I know the language is so import for me,so i need to learn with my all life Yes,i must to do that Maybe we can change my life And i always remember a suggestion:Knowledge can change one life. I really want go to "Big apple"in future. A rainy day, with nothing to do but sit in front of my laptop, waiting to see someone online. But I can not say any words to them, for I am just a Chinese girl. ('China girl' can be used as an insult, so I suggest that you not use that phrase. Friends may call each other that for fun, just as they may call each other by many different insulting words. But that is amongst friends and not to strangers. ) I know that learning English is very important to me, so I need to study as much as I can. (I changed "the language" to English so that the subject is more clear because "the language" can be any language. What Shawn wrote: "with all my energy" is correct, the phrase I changed it to "I need to study as much as I can" is just a more concrete expressian ie less figurative. Because "studying" is an action" whereas "learning" is something abstract that just happens all the time, because you can learn things all the time without "studying". An example would be: If you don't know how to do something, and a person is just nice and shows you how. Then you just learned how to do the action without studying anythying. ) It is something I must do. (I just changed this to sound more 'formal'. you can say "Yes, I must do that" but it sounds like you are talking to yourself, instead of to another person, when you say it that way.) Mabey it can change my life. (is 'it' refering to the learning of English? you can keep it as "we" if you are perhaps refering to people, or some other plural subject) I am always thinking about this saying: Knowledge can change one's life. (I changed the verb becau

Rainy day A Rainy Day,and nothing to do and seat before my laptop,see some one online,but i can not see anywords to them,for i just a China girl I know the language is so import for me,so i need to learn with my all life Yes,i must to do that Maybe we can change my life And i always remember a suggestion:Knowledge can change one life. I really want go to "Big apple"in future. A rainy day, with nothing to do but sit in front of my laptop, waiting to see someone online. But I can not say any words to them, for I am just a Chinese girl. ('China girl' can be used as an insult, so I suggest that you not use that phrase. Friends may call each other that for fun, just as they may call each other by many different insulting words. But that is amongst friends and not to strangers. ) I know that learning English is very important to me, so I need to study as much as I can. (I changed "the language" to English so that the subject is more clear because "the language" can be any language. What Shawn wrote: "with all my energy" is correct, the phrase I changed it to "I need to study as much as I can" is just a more concrete expressian ie less figurative. Because "studying" is an action" whereas "learning" is something abstract that just happens all the time, because you can learn things all the time without "studying". An example would be: If you don't know how to do something, and a person is just nice and shows you how. Then you just learned how to do the action without studying anythying. ) It is something I must do. (I just changed this to sound more 'formal'. you can say "Yes, I must do that" but it sounds like you are talking to yourself, instead of to another person, when you say it that way.) Mabey it can change my life. (is 'it' refering to the learning of English? you can keep it as "we" if you are perhaps refering to people, or some other plural subject) I am always thinking about this saying: Knowledge can change one's life. (I changed the verb becau