My morning

I work as a yoga teacher and as a beautician in a beauty salon. I can’t work now <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in order of</s> because of the coronavirus <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">quarantine</s> lockdown. Many of my colleagues conduct classes online, but I haven’t made the decision to do it. Probably, I’m too lazy to work. I’m married, and my husband provide<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">r</s>s for me. So my day starts quite a bit later, than it did before lockdown <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">quarantine</s>. I wake up around <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">fifteen minutes</s> quarter to eight. The first thing <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">which</s> I do is a short massage of my head, hands and face. After that, I wash my face, take a shower and do my morning exercises. Then I practice<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">d</s> pranayama. It is a special yoga breathing (breath control) practice. It takes one hour, or a little bit more. At nine or half past nine, I start cooking my breakfast.

Something new today

I’ve done a lot of things today. I had my hair cut and saw a doctor. I want to talk about the doctor stuff (my doctor's appointment). I waited for a really long time outside <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">of</s> his office. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">At the same time</s> During this time, I noticed that about four people had already gone <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">inside</s> into the office next to his. I was wondering if the patient inside <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">must got</s> had some really bad disease. About twenty minutes later, I finally met the doctor who <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">is</s> was really patient and kind. I finally <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">know</s> realised why he took <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">this</s> such a long time. He earnestly answered every question<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s> I asked and explained details to me. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">That</s> This was an amazing experience, which really changed my impression of doctors. I will definitely go for (to) him next time.

Next step in my career

I got my bachelor's degree in law <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">school</s> in 2018. Since then, I was kind of lost, so I started to study to take a test for a public job. So, I spend the year of 2019 studying for this test. Unfortunately, the test was canceled and I got very sad.

But then, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">on</s> in January I got a job offert <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">on</s> at a private office. So, I decided to take this oppotunity and started to work there. The office <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">is specialized</s> specialises in a very interesting topic: obstetric violence and family law. So, that was the next step that I took.

My biggest dream

My biggest dream is to have a safe life. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">It</s> This means that I would have enough money to pay <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> rent, to buy food and things, also that I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">can</s> could buy <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">electric</s> electronic devices and clothes, and that I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">can</s> could spend <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the vacances</s> my holidays abroad and get good medical <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">help</s> care. Maybe I would have my own flat or house, I don't know. Maybe I would live abroad because I don't feel safe in my country.

I think that all I need is <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> a home, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> a good job, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> time for my hobbies and the opportunity (ability) to help my family. And a cat. Definitely.

<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Btw</s> By the way, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">I'll</s> I'd get a cat from <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> an animal shelter. Every animal deserves love and a home. I don't want to support an <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">animal husbandry</s> petigree breeder because highbred animals (cats, dogs, etc.) often have health problems. Now, my family has one dog and two cats, one cat which came from nowhere and one <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">was</s> which we got <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in the</s> from a cafe. When I was about 7 years old, we wanted a cat. One day, my mom and I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">have seen</s> saw a notice about 2 kittens in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> a café: a girl and a boy. We had <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">choosed a</s> chosen the boy, but then we <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">knew</s> found out/realised it <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">is</s> was a <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">girl</s> female kitten (I don't know why my mom didn't notice<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">d</s> that).

Please, tell about your pets :)

I'm new here. Please help me!

Hi, my name is Johan Rodenas and I'm from Peru. I study law at university. I'm 21 years old. I have two brothers; their names are Fabrizio and Cristopher. I have a girlfriend; she is very beautiful<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">l</s> and her name is Olenka. She is 22 years old.

I us<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s>ually eat lunch at seven o'clock. (Lunch is normally eaten at midday, maybe you mean dinner/tea?)

In my house, there are two pets, one very cute black cat and one chubby dog.

In my district there is a cinema. There are also many markets and there are some parks. My district is beautiful. I love Peru.

Schtroumpfs

The Schtroumpfs is a <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">belguim</s> Belgian comic book created by Peyo in 1958. The story is about a <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">people</s> community of little blue characters living in a village in a big forest. The author published sixteen comic books. After his death in 1992, his son managed the publication of new comics.

Since 2013, twenty-five million of these comic books have been sold <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in</s> around the world.

In 2011, an original plate (page) of Schtroumpfs Noirs <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">drew</s> drawn by Peyo himself was sold <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">at</s> for sixty-eight thousand euros.

At the cinema, the movie "Les Schtroumpfs" <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">reashes</s> earned more than five hundred and sixty million <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">of</s> dollars.

<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">All</s> The whole story is based on the middle ages and the Schtroumpfs try to protect their village <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">face to</s> from Gargamel and his cat Azrael.

The tribe live in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">the</s> little mushroom houses. A typical Schtroumpf is little and blue with a tail. They all wear a white woolly hat and white trousers, except the chief who wears a red hat.

Everyday...

Everyday, I do the same things. My knees are already aching, because for almost 2 months I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">can not</s> have not been able to go to the gym or take a walk in a square, for example. I spend approximately 15 hours in front of a computer working and studying per day. Right now, I am trying to improve my English, because I think that there are more international opportunities <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">around the world</s> to get a job as systems developer, and I believe that English can help me. Most of my friends already <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">got a</s> have remote jobs, with some of them working in <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> big companys, like microsoft.

Therefore, I would like your help to correct this text, I will appreciate it. Thanks a lot. If I can help you in anything, please let me know.

08.06.2020

08.06.2020.

It's <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">fifteenth minutes</s> quarter past twelve. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a.m</s>.

I did nothing unusual or interesting today. And I hate such days. I hate realizing that my day was (you could also use 'has been') wasted. But I can't say that I am lazy and don't want do anything.

It's quite the opposite. I really want to work or learn something new, but <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">there is quarantine in</s> our town is in lockdown and it is difficult to find a job. Also, I don't have friends in my hometown because I study in another city and I don't communicate with my old school friends. We congratulate each other on birthdays but nothing more. Now, I have come to my parents for the <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">quarantine</s> lockdown period and all my university friends are far away. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">And</s> It is a big problem to (for) me because I need to have real communication, to hang out with my friends and so on. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">That's</s> It all makes me sad and nervous. I hope tomorrow will be <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">more</s> nicer ('nicer' sounds more natural than 'more nice') and <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">useful</s> more productive.