08.06.2020
08.06.2020.
It's fifteenth minutes past twelve a.m.
I did nothing unusual or interesting today. And I hate such days. I hate realize that my day was wasted. But I can't say that I am lazy and don't want do anything.
Opposite I really want to work or learn something new. But there is quarantine in our town and it is difficult to find a job. Also I don't have friends in hometown because I study in other city and I don't communicate with my school old friends . We congratulate each other on birthdays but not more. Now I came to my parents for the quarantine period. And all my university friends are far away. And it is big problem to me because I need to real communication, to hang out with my friends and so on. That's all makes me sad and nervous. Hope tomorrow will be more nice and useful
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08.06.2020
08.06.2020.
It's fifteenth minutes quarter past twelve. a.m.
I did nothing unusual or interesting today. And I hate such days. I hate realizing that my day was (you could also use 'has been') wasted. But I can't say that I am lazy and don't want do anything.
It's quite the opposite. I really want to work or learn something new, but there is quarantine in our town is in lockdown and it is difficult to find a job. Also, I don't have friends in my hometown because I study in another city and I don't communicate with my old school friends. We congratulate each other on birthdays but nothing more. Now, I have come to my parents for the quarantine lockdown period and all my university friends are far away. And It is a big problem to (for) me because I need to have real communication, to hang out with my friends and so on. That's It all makes me sad and nervous. I hope tomorrow will be more nicer ('nicer' sounds more natural than 'more nice') and useful more productive.
Good job! I hope you have a better day tomorrow.
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08.06.2020
08.06.2020.
It's fifteenth minutes past twelve a.m.
We would usually say "It's a quarter past midnight," but "It's fifteen minutes past twelve a.m." is grammatically correct.
I did nothing unusual or interesting today. And I hate such days. I hate realize that my day was wasted. But I can't say that I am lazy and don't want do anything.
I hate realizing that my day was wasted.
Opposite I really want to work or learn something new.
You are probably trying to say something like: "It is just the opposite - I really want to work or learn something new."
But there is quarantine in our town and it is difficult to find a job.
There is a quarantine in our town - watch for articles. Russians often have difficulty with English articles such as "a," "an," and "the" because they don't have an equivalent in the Russian language. But you've included it for "job," so you're on the right track!
Also I don't have friends in hometown because I study in other city and I don't communicate with my school old friends.
I study in another city and I don't communicate with my old school friends.
We congratulate each other on birthdays but not more.
but nothing more
Now I came to my parents for the quarantine period. And all my university friends are far away.
And it is big problem to me because I need to real communication, to hang out with my friends and so on.
It is a big problem
That's all makes me sad and nervous. Hope tomorrow will be more nice and useful
No need for the apostrophe s ('s) - It should just read "That all makes me sad and nervous."
Also: I hope tomorrow will be more nice and useful (you might also try saying "I hope tomorrow will be better and more productive." - this will sound more natural to native speakers.
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