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Please help my to correct my article. Thank you! When I was young, I received a rabbit toy. It’s my birthday gift from my parent, they bought it because they thought the rabbit toy was as cute as me. I gave the rabbit a name, Lily. I believed it had a magic, it couldn’t speak didn’t mean it didn’t listen. When I left it alone in my room, it would come to life, and before I walked in and caught it, it returned to its place as quick as lightning! So before I left the room, I would prepare some of my favorite snacks in front of it, and I used to shared with it my secret and told it a bed time story everyday. It’s like a friend of me.

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Please help me to correct my article. Thank you!

When I was young, I received a rabbit toy. It was my birthday gift from my parents, they bought it because they thought the rabbit toy was as cute as me. I gave the rabbit a name, Lily. I believed it had a magic, and that though it couldn’t speak, that didn’t mean it didn’t listen. When I left it alone in my room, it would come to life, and before I walked could walk in and caught catch it, it returned would return to its place as quick as lightning! So, before I left the room, I would prepare some of my favorite snacks in front of it, and I used to shared with it my secrets with it and told tell it a bedtime story everyday. It was like a my friend of me.

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