What can be done to tackle cars and pollution increasing?

Good morning to everyone. Here's my daily essay. Thank you in advance for corrections.

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In spite of recent warnings about emerging problems such as global warming, the environment in cities have dramatically becoming polluted because of the increasing number of vehicles used by citizens. Authorities should definitely pay bigger attention to this issue and find a way to combat what<s> it </s>can be defined as an emergency. Fortunately, there are some possible solutions.

First of all, governments should orient their efforts to a sustainable transition by offering a wide range of alternatives like electric public transport or supporting ecofriendly practises like carpooling. People need to be encouraged not to use their cars and instead consider buses or trams as enjoyable and efficient ((modes of transport))* . In order to reach this goal, it is important to invest in modern and rapid ones throughout most of the city.

In addition, it would be highly useful teaching subjects related to sustainability at schools. Children should be accustomed to thinking about their future cars as only one of the many possible means which could be used to move across the city. This would guarantee the building of a new ethics based on a responsible approach towards travelling. Furthermore, a project like this could trigger interesting effects. It might be sound unlikely, however children could partly influence the choices of their parents.

As a result of these changes, the city will be reformed. These are just some of countless results which can be achieved ( if considered by municipalities) to reduce the number of cars and, consequently, the amount of pollution. The first is a short-term proposal, while the second a long-term one. Either could be extremely impactful.

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You have a really good understanding of English!!

A lot of what I corrected was just to make the text flow better :)

I agree, climate change is a big problem and it is up to our generation to deal with it :/

If you have any questions about the corrections just reply to this

Have a great day!

*This is not essential but would help it sound more authentic

Please correct my essay 🙏

Nowadays barely anybody has time to relax or enjoy (life) because most people are working or studying, but do we spend too much time doing this?

It is often said that creative activities like painting or pottery have lots of advantages because if you do them, you can de- stress from your routine like your work or studies. And they also can be beneficial in keeping your brain focused in/during your daily activities.

Furthermore, if you are not so good at these activities, you can choose another interest. A lot of peoples favourite activities include sports and exercise .You can go for a walk after <s>your</s> work or maybe join <s>to</s> a sports team, the key is to do something that you enjoy and forget your responsiblities.

There are no excuses, despite the fact that your work or studies are so hard, you should always find a moment for yourself- go out into nature and breathe fresh air.

To sum up, work and studies are important in our lives, however, they should be balanced with hobbies and interests, that way you will be more relaxed and productive in your routines.

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This was really great!

I agree that we should try and balance our work and leisure lifestyle :)

It was mostly gramatically correct but I just tried to make it flow better and sound more authentic.

Have a nice day!

-Benita

Hi There! Please, correct my texts!! #3

#Present

A Little Animal

My kids and I love walking in the park. It is not far from our home and we go there every day. This park is like a real forest in the center of the city. There are a lot of trees, a small pond with swans and a playground. We love this park because there are squirrels in it. The squirrels are funny and kind. They are not afraid of people at all. Kids love feeding the squirrels and touching their bushy tails. We always have some seeds and cookies in our pockets. We put some seeds on the palm of our hands and show it to our squirrels. They come up and jump onto our hands. Then they sit and start eating. My kids absolutely love it!

#Past

A Little Animal

My kids and I loved walking in the park. It was not far from our home and we went there every day. This park was like a real forest in the center of the city. There were a lot of trees, a small pound with swans and a playground. We loved this park because there were squirrels in it. The squirrels were funny and kind. They were not afraid of people at all. Kids loved feeding the squirrels and touching their bushy tails. We always had some seeds and cookies in our pockets. We put some seeds on the palm of our hands and showed it to our squirrels. They came up and jump onto our hands. Then they sat and started eating. My kids absolutely loved it!

#Future

A Little Animal

My kids and will I love walking in the park. It will not be far from our home and we will go there every day. This park will be like a real forest in the center of the city. There will be a lot of trees, a small pound with swans and a playground. We will love this park because there will be squirrels in it. The squirrels will be funny and kind. They will not be afraid of people at all. Kids will love feeding the squirrels and touching their bushy tails. We will always have some seeds and cookies in our pockets. We will put some seeds on the palm of our hands and show it to ours squirrels. They will come up and jump onto our hands. Then they will sit and start eating. My kids will absolutely love it!

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This shows amazing understanding of English!

Well done and keep up the good work :)

I just replaced 'is a piece of' with 'will be like' because it sounds more authentic.

Write a letter to a friend trying to convince them to come and play Frisbee with you.

Hi M

I haven't seen you for a while. How have you been lately? Are you still on your diet? Last time you told me it was hard to keep to your controlled diet because low-carb diets make you feel low. In order to cheer you up I’d like to invite you to come to my apartment this weekend. We can watch movies and play Frisbee. Have you ever played Frisbee before? I am so into it now. Frisbee is much more fun than running. It can exercise a lot of parts of our bodies. For example, I need to calculate the angle and how hard I should throw it to my partner. When it’s my turn to catch the Frisbee, I may run and jump, which can exercise my muscles. I have been playing Frisbee for weeks. It is not limited to location, just as long as there is space. I usually play it in an empty place which is near my apartment. You will definitely love this place because there are many dogs to play with . For me, the most attractive part of this activity is the feeling in the moment I catch the Frisbee. In that moment, I have a strong sense of achievement. This feeling will definitely cheer you up. Last, but not least, playing Frisbee can also help you to lose weight because I have lost nearly 3 kilos of fat. Sounds good,doesn’t it? Think about it and I will wait for your reply!

Joy

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I would definitely come and play Frisbee with you!

Your level and understanding of English is really good! Keep it up :)

327 - Trash in Italy

The most important environmental issue in Italy is related to trash. Italy is full of unauthorised landfills and this is terrible for the environment. It is not that rare to see a lot of trash on riversides or in very hidden places. This is not tolerable, especially in a country said to be one of the most beautiful in the world. The problem was mainly related to Italian culture, but <s>hopefully</s> many things have changed. Recycling is now mandatory and <s>the </s>younger people tend to be more aware of the environmental issues. Despite the fact that this is <s>something </s>definitely positive, I am very concerned about the consequences of what had regularly happened for more than fifty years. Italian people used not to respect the gorgeous place where they lived and the outcome of their actions might be irreversible. In fact, the main problem with the environment is that it is really easy to pollute, but nature takes an incredibly long time to purify or regenerate. This is also why everyone should do their best to try to preserve the incredible Italian landscapes.

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Your english is very good xxx

I want to visit Italy one day,seems like a beautiful country :)

328 - Applying for a university course

If I had to choose which university course to apply for, I would definitely opt for the one with the highest teaching quality. Another important aspect would be the location. In fact, I wish I had studied abroad. Since I do not have good memories of my university time at all, I would choose the one with the best atmosphere ON campus. The reputation of the university, as well as its non-academic facilities, is something <s>of what</s> I would not be interested in. At the same time, since I do not consider the most expensive UNIVERSITIES TO BE THE <s>as</s> the best ONES, I would try to choose one with a reasonable tuition cost.

In conclusion, I would TRY my best to avoid what happened during my terrible five years of university.

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This is really good!!!

Im sorry you have such a bad experience at university, and i agree with you- more expensive is not always better.