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What can be done to tackle cars and pollution increasing? Good morning to everyone. Here's my daily essay. Thank you in advance for corrections. ----------- In spite of recent warnings about emerging problems such as global warming, cities environment has been becoming dramatically polluted because of the increasing number of vehicles used by citizens. Authorities should definitely pay bigger attention on this issue and find a way to combat what it can be defined as an emergency. Fortunately, there are some possible solutions. First of all, governments should orient their efforts to the sustainable transition by offering a wide range of alternatives like electric public transport or supporting ecofriendly practises like carpooling. People need to be discouraged in using their cars by considering bus or tram as enjoyable and efficient. In order to reach this goal, it is important to invest in modern and rapid ones, besides covering with them the most of city, spatially and temporally. In addition, it would be highly useful teaching subjects related to sustainability at schools. Children should be accustomed to think about their future cars as only one of the possible means which could be used to move across the city. This would guarantee the building of a new ethics based on a responsible approach towards travelling. Furthermore, a project like this could trigger interesting effects. It might be sound unlikely, however children could partly influence the choices of their parents. Therefore, it is possible to figure a different city. These are just some of countless opportunities which can be considered by municipalities to reduce the number of cars and, consequently, the amount of pollution. The first is a short-term proposal, while the second a long-term one. Either could be extremely impactful.

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What can be done to tackle cars and pollution increasing?

Good morning to everyone. Here's my daily essay. Thank you in advance for corrections.

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In spite of recent warnings about emerging problems such as global warming, the environment in cities have dramatically becoming polluted because of the increasing number of vehicles used by citizens. Authorities should definitely pay bigger attention to this issue and find a way to combat what it can be defined as an emergency. Fortunately, there are some possible solutions.

First of all, governments should orient their efforts to a sustainable transition by offering a wide range of alternatives like electric public transport or supporting ecofriendly practises like carpooling. People need to be encouraged not to use their cars and instead consider buses or trams as enjoyable and efficient ((modes of transport))* . In order to reach this goal, it is important to invest in modern and rapid ones throughout most of the city.

In addition, it would be highly useful teaching subjects related to sustainability at schools. Children should be accustomed to thinking about their future cars as only one of the many possible means which could be used to move across the city. This would guarantee the building of a new ethics based on a responsible approach towards travelling. Furthermore, a project like this could trigger interesting effects. It might be sound unlikely, however children could partly influence the choices of their parents.

As a result of these changes, the city will be reformed. These are just some of countless results which can be achieved ( if considered by municipalities) to reduce the number of cars and, consequently, the amount of pollution. The first is a short-term proposal, while the second a long-term one. Either could be extremely impactful.

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You have a really good understanding of English!!
A lot of what I corrected was just to make the text flow better :)
I agree, climate change is a big problem and it is up to our generation to deal with it :/
If you have any questions about the corrections just reply to this
Have a great day!

*This is not essential but would help it sound more authentic
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What can be done to tackle cars and pollution increasing?

Good morning to everyone. Here's my daily essay. Thank you in advance for corrections.

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In spite of recent warnings about emerging problems such as global warming, cities' environments have been becoming dramatically polluted because of the increasing number of vehicles used by citizens. Authorities should definitely pay bigger more attention on to this issue and find a way to combat what it can (certainly) be defined as an emergency. Fortunately, there are some possible solutions.

First of all, governments should orient their efforts to on the sustainable transition by offering a wide range of alternatives like electric public transport, or supporting eco-friendly practises like carpooling. People need to be discouraged in from using their cars by considering bus or tram as enjoyable and efficient. In order to reach this goal, it is important to invest in modern and rapid ones, besides covering with them the most of the city, both spatially and temporally.

In addition, it would be highly useful to teaching subjects related to sustainability at schools. Children should be accustomed to thinking about their future cars as only one of the possible means which could be used to move across / within / around the city. This would guarantee the building of a new ethics based on a responsible approach towards travelling. Furthermore, a project like this could trigger interesting effects. It might be sound unlikely, however, children could partly influence the choices of their parents.

Therefore, it is possible to figure create a different city. These are just some of countless opportunities which can be considered by municipalities to reduce the number of cars and, consequently, the amount of pollution. The first is a short-term proposal, while the second a long-term one. Either could be extremely impactful.

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