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Write a letter to a friend trying to convince them to come and play Frisbee with you. Hi M I haven't seen you for a while. How have you been lately? Are you still on your diet? Last time you told me it was hard to keep to your diet control because low-carb diets make you feel low. In order to cheer you up I’d like to invite you to come to my apartment this weekend. We can watch movies and play Frisbee. Have you ever played Frisbee before? I am so into it now. Frisbee is much more fun than running. It can exercise a lot of parts of our bodies. For example, I need to calculate the angle and how hard I should throw it to my partner. When it’s my turn to catch the Frisbee, I may run and jump, which can exercise my muscles. I have been playing Frisbee for weeks. It is not limited to location as long as there is space. I usually play it in an empty place which is near my apartment. You will definitely love this place because there are many dogs to play with . For me, the most attractive part of this activity is the feeling of the moment I catch the Frisbee. At that moment, I have a strong sense of achievement. This feeling will definitely cheer you up. Last but not least, playing Frisbee can also help to lose weight because I have lost nearly 3 kilos of fat. Sounds good,doesn’t it? Think about it and I will wait for your reply! Joy

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Write a letter to a friend trying to convince them to come and play Frisbee with you.

Hi M
I haven't seen you for a while. How have you been lately? Are you still on your diet? Last time you told me it was hard to keep to your controlled diet because low-carb diets make you feel low. In order to cheer you up I’d like to invite you to come to my apartment this weekend. We can watch movies and play Frisbee. Have you ever played Frisbee before? I am so into it now. Frisbee is much more fun than running. It can exercise a lot of parts of our bodies. For example, I need to calculate the angle and how hard I should throw it to my partner. When it’s my turn to catch the Frisbee, I may run and jump, which can exercise my muscles. I have been playing Frisbee for weeks. It is not limited to location, just as long as there is space. I usually play it in an empty place which is near my apartment. You will definitely love this place because there are many dogs to play with . For me, the most attractive part of this activity is the feeling in the moment I catch the Frisbee. In that moment, I have a strong sense of achievement. This feeling will definitely cheer you up. Last, but not least, playing Frisbee can also help you to lose weight because I have lost nearly 3 kilos of fat. Sounds good,doesn’t it? Think about it and I will wait for your reply!

Joy

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I would definitely come and play Frisbee with you!
Your level and understanding of English is really good! Keep it up :)

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