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Kayoko's notebook entry: Feb 12, 2011
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Feb 11th is a <strike>Japanese national </strike> <font color="#ff0000">national Japanese </font>holiday.
<strike>I dined out with my friend at 'Gohan-cafe' in Ginza where is one of the most exciting areas in Tokyo.
</strike>To celebrate the holiday, I went out for dinner with my friend at Gohan Cafe in Ginza, which is one of the most exciting areas in Tokyo.
'Gohan' means 'rice' in Japanese. Gohan is <strike>our Japanese's staple food. </strike>a staple food of the Japanese diet. <strike>I was glad to have a good supper :)
</strike>I was glad that I was able to have a delicious dinner at that restaurant.
It's difficult for me to write a notebook entry in English.
good job! :) your English is great! ^^0 votedMarch 26, 20110Watching some movies: Feb 28, 2011
I watched three DVDs yesterday.
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"Pirates of Silicon Valley","Naushika",and "Edward scissor hands"!
I have (or you can shorten this to "I've") never watched "Naushika". This movie is an animation drawn by (maybe you mean "created by"? usually with movies the one who created a concept is not the one who actually draws it for the movie, but maybe it is different in Japan?) Hayao Miyazaki.
<strike>I was considered that to live together with nature</strike>. I agree with him on his idea that we all live together with nature.<strike> I like his work since I was young!! </strike>I have liked his movies since I was little (in English, you are considered to be young when you are in your twenties as well as when you were a child, so you are still considered young in this case ;) lol, when you want to talk about yourself when you were a child, you usually say little, a child, or the exact age (ex: when I was 7 I liked hello kitty, etc.)
<strike>If you have ever watched it yet , let's check it!! </strike>If you haven't watched it yet, you should check it out!
good job with your English!! ^^0 votedMarch 26, 20111applying for a Working Holiday visa for New Zealand.
Today I'm starting to apply for a working Holiday visa in New Zealand.
ah, by the way, what's the difference between "of " and "in" (I used in the title "visa of", but should I use "visa in"<font color="#ff0000"> instead?</font>)
then I encountered a problem when I was filling in the blanks <font color="#ff0000">on the</font> application form.
I have to write in the details of my passport and have another form of identification to prove my identity.
passport...sure I have it. and...
there are three options to select for the additional form of identification.
driver's license.
birth certificate.
national ID.
I thought nothing much about this because I have a driver's license.
but! there was a unexpected surprise...
I had to <font color="#ff0000">put down the expiration date of my driver's license, and then I thought</font>....oh my god! my license needs to be renewed this summer by my next birthday on July 17th and I will be in NZ at that time!
I almost forgot about this.
So I thought, well that's ok I'll just renew it immediately.
but then I found out that I can't renew it unless I prove with good reason why I can't do it in its normal time period.
it's too early to renew. it must be renewed during the two months around my birthday.and I don't have anything to prove that I will be in New Zealand yet.
so it seems I can't use driver's license.
how about my birth certificate?
oh no, I can get it only in my hometown, which is about 100km away from where I'm living now; Tokyo.
now this is getting troublesome..
at last, maybe I can use my national ID!!
it can be a health insurance ID according to the Japanese web site which helps those applying for visas
yes I have it!!!!!!
oh no,,,,
its expiration is coming at the end of this month!!
what the....
Doesn't matter; I'm gonna get my visa no matter what.
wow I've written quite a long note this time....
writing text in a foreign language makes me sleepy.
I need to practice much more...
I hope someone will correct my terrible, pitiful English please!!!!!!!0 votedMarch 12, 20110First notebook entry: Introducing myself
why am I learning English?
I think I've just written about it on my profile...
I didn't know I was going to have to re-explain why..
anyway,
I'm studying English because I wanna understand what they say in movies perfectly.
I really love to watch movies.
sure I can understand movies with subtitles, but I don't like it.
subtitles are not what they really say, it ruins the original mood of a movie.
that's why I'm learning English.
and there is one more reason.
I'd like to meet someone who I've never known before.
I always like to experience new things; meeting new people.
there are 140 million people in Japan and I can talk with them.
but..
what if I can speak English?
I bet then my world's gonna be bigger and more interesting once I can do that.0 votedMarch 11, 20111
