Today I started to apply (or, started applying)  for a Working Holiday visa in New Zealand. 
ah, by the way what's the difference between useing "of " and "in" just like what I used at title and above this.visa of,,, visa in... 

 Can’t explain this one but maybe you could check out these sites

- http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/prepositions-at-in-on-time.htm

- http://www.englishforums.com/English/PrepositionsInOfFor/zwnzw/post.htm

then I got (had sounds more natural) a problem when I was filling blanks in the application form. 
I have to entry enter the details of my passport and another form of identification I would be able to produce to prove my identity.
passport...sure I have it. and... 
there are three options to select (three options available sounds more natural). 
a driver's license. 
a birth certificate. 
or a national ID. 
I thought nothing hard about this (I didn’t think much about it sounds more natural) because I have a driver's license. 
but! 
there was a unexpected hole problem... 
I had to entry date the license ieeued.and expiry date of it. I had to enter the date when the license was issues and when it’s going to expire.
....oh my god! (Sorry, I just absolutely disagree with the flippant use of that statement) my license needs to be renewed this summer about by my next birthday on July 17th and I will be in NZ at the that time! 
I almost forget forgot (or forgot about) it. 
The new date of issued and expiry day will be known after renewal (it’s renewed sounds more natural). 

ok, ok, then I’ll just renew it immediately! 

but there was next another one (one seems to vague) problem.... 
I can't renew it unless I prove the reason why I can't do it in proper period. 
it's too early to renew. it must be renewed during within the two months around my birthday

and I don't have anything to prove it yet. (I’m not sure what you mean by this)

it seems I can't fill it up with use my driver's license right now. 

how about my birth certificate? 
oh no I can get it only (I can only get it sounds more natural) in my hometown where I've originally lived (seems redundant). 
yes I'm living in center of Tokyo ... about 100 km far away from my hometown. 

it's This is getting troublesome.. 

at lastly, my national ID!! 
This can be a health insurance ID, according to Japanese web site for helping visa applier applicants. 
yes I have it!!!!!! (yes I have that sounds more natural)

oh oh,,,, 

its expiration is comming on the end of this month!! (It’s expiring at the end of the month sounds more natural)
what a.... (I can feel your pain… :D)

anyway I'm gonna make it. (Sounds a bit vague)


wow I've written quite long note this time.... (Yes you have :p)
writting text in foreign languege language makes me sleepy. 
I need practice more and more... 

I hope someone will correct my terrible terribly pitiful (or terrible and pitiful)English please!!!!!!! (Don’t be too hard on yourself. You should hear my Japanese. All I know is hai and I don’t even know how to write that down. :p)

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You might want to write something shorter next time, just a suggestion ;)

But I can definitely feel your pain. One time I was applying for something and used my Drivers license as proof of identity only to discover it was already expired! Turned out ok in the end.

Good luck with your application (How do you say that in Japanese?).

Mata ne