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Watching some movies: Feb 28, 2011 I watched three DVDs yesterday. "Pirates of Silicon Valley","Naushika",and "Edward scissor hands"! I had never watched "Naushika". This movie is animation drawn by Hayao Miyazaki. I was considered that to live together with nature.I like his work since I was young!! If you have ever watched it yet , let's check it!!

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Watching some movies: Feb 28, 2011

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I watched three DVDs yesterday.
"Pirates of Silicon Valley","Naushika",and "Edward scissor hands"!
I have (or you can shorten this to "I've") never watched "Naushika". This movie is an animation drawn by (maybe you mean "created by"? usually with movies the one who created a concept is not the one who actually draws it for the movie, but maybe it is different in Japan?) Hayao Miyazaki.
I was considered that to live together with nature. I agree with him on his idea that we all live together with nature. I like his work since I was young!! I have liked his movies since I was little (in English, you are considered to be young when you are in your twenties as well as when you were a child, so you are still considered young in this case ;) lol, when you want to talk about yourself when you were a child, you usually say little, a child, or the exact age (ex: when I was 7 I liked hello kitty, etc.) 
If you have ever watched it yet , let's check it!! If you haven't watched it yet, you should check it out!


good job with your English!! ^^

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Watching some movies: Feb 28, 2011

I watched three DVDs yesterday.
"Pirates of Silicon Valley","Naushika",and "Edward scissor hands"!
I had never watched "Naushika". This movie's is animation was drawn by Hayao Miyazaki.
I He was considered always thought that to  we live together with nature. I've liked his work since I was young!!

If you have never watched it yet , let's check it out!!


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I watched three DVD's yesterday,
"Pirates of Silicon Valley", "Naushika", and " Edward Scissor Hands".
It was my first time watching "Naushika". I know that the movie's animation was drawn by Hayao Miyazaki. I've liked his work since I was young. I agree with his thoughts that we live together with nature.

If you have never watched "Naushika" before, you should check it out!

Good job & Good Luck with English!

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