Kayoko's notebook entry: Feb 12, 2011
Feb 11th is Japanese national holiday.
I dined out with my friend at 'Gohan-cafe' in Ginza where is one of the most exciting area in Tokyo.
'Gohan' means 'rice' in Japanese. Gohan is our Japanese's staple food.
I was glad to have a good supper ：）
It's difficult for me to write a notebook in English.
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Kayoko's notebook entry: Feb 12, 2011
Feb 11th is a Japanese national holiday.I dined out with my friend at 'Gohan-cafe' in Ginza, one of the most exciting areas in Tokyo.
'Gohan' is the japanese word for 'rice', and the country's staple food.
I was pleased to have a good supper.
It's difficult for me to write a notebook in English.
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I forgot to ask..... what is the February 11th holiday? I forgot - is it Children's Day? Emperor's Birthday? maybe I will search Google.com.... but I like your writing - please teach more about Japan while you practice your English writing.
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I think it's very good.
remember to use plural (I know japanese does not have but in English it can sound a little strange) - so - because tokyo has more than 1 exciting area... say "areas" and not "area" or you can say "places" but remember to use the plural.... (it's only a small mistake though)
my opinion about "good supper" or "delicious dinner" .... I think "good dinner" is the best way to say it......
good luck!!!
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Kayoko's notebook entry: Feb 12, 2011
Feb 11th is Japanese national holiday. [[Feb. 11th is a Japanese national holiday]]]
I dined out with my friend at 'Gohan-cafe' in Ginza where is one of the most exciting area in Tokyo. [[[....in Ginza it is one of the most exciting areas in Tokyo]]
'Gohan' means 'rice' in Japanese. Gohan is our Japanese's staple food. [['Gohan' means 'rice' in Japanese and is our staple food]]
I was glad to have a good supper ：）[[[have a good dinner]]]
It's difficult for me to write a notebook in English.
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instead of area use place
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