Resolution to myself in the New Year

I will be more self disciplined. Self discipline is very important to reach success in any deal.

I want improve my time management. I want to follow a schedule for every day, and not spend time on negative thoughts <s>bad thinking (like judging, worries)</s>. I want to begin waking up early, so that I <s>want to</s> have time <s>for repeating</s> to practice English in the morning <s>on morning</s> or to go <s>for going</s> to the gym. I also want to visit to psychologist every week. Overall, these things would <s>It</s> help me to be more healthy.

Good job. The suggestions above would help your sentences to read more smoothly.

About me. Please correct

I currently live with my family in detached house.

I run my own company.

I am involved in the manufacture of automotive accesories, specifically tuning accessories.

I run online stores, I have 14 online stores.

I employ (or hire) 15 employees.

I have higher education. I graduated from university in the direction of the administration.

(Good job! Everything made sense except the last sentence and I only saw one typo. The suggestions below are just ways to make it flow more naturally.)

I currently live with my family in a detached house. I run my own company. I am involved in the manufacture of automotive accessories, specifically tuning accessories. I run online stores, and currently have 14 of them. I employ 15 people. I achieved a degree since I attended and graduated from a university.

Argentina: Boca City

"La ciudad de la boca" (Boca city) is in Buenos Aires. It's a perfect place for understanding the country’s culture. The walls are painted by Quinquela Martin. Thanks to him, this place has become a tourist attraction. There is a museum with his works.

If you go through the many houses where the foreign people lived, you will find the Quinquela's house, which is painted, like others <s>same way at the other</s>, <s>by</s> in brilliant color [<em>Using colour is a British way of spelling it. I’m not sure if that’s what you wanted. In America we write it as color.</em>] <s>When the collaborators covered the houses with pinture, they got this from the sailors.</s> [I’m not sure what you’re trying to say here, so I’m guessing.] When these homes were painted, they used this style because it was popular with sailors.

<s>Many people in Boca, shows his art:</s> There are many people in Boca. They dance tango, and sell their pictures and souvenirs.

what's my favorite ....

…tv show?

I don´t have a favorite TV show, because I think TV is a bad thing in our world. In my country is a bad idea to <s>see</s> watch TV because shows are not trustworthy; there are a lot of lies and political influence <s>control</s>.

…food?

I think my favorite food in the world is a delicious steak with salty potatoes and guacamole. Oh my god, that is so tasty.

…sport?

<s>Always </s>I have always been bad <s>for the</s> at sports, but I remember in school I was very good <s>for</s> at gymnastics. I was even <s>could be</s> a cheerleader for a few weeks ( I <s>leave</s> left the group because I thought it was boring <s>for me</s>)

…hobby?

I like learning English. I am a little bad but I <s>try to be better</s> am trying to improve.

…music?

As a Colombian, I like the music that I can dance to like salsa, bachata, regueton, merengue, vallenato... <em>In Colombia we dance almost the rhythms in pairs. [I don't know what this sentence means, so I'm not sure how to fix it]</em>

…movie?

My favorite movie is Inception, then Limitless and all of <s>the</s> Will Smith's movies. [Here you could say "all of the Will Smith movies" or "all of Will Smith's movies" but not both]

…colour?

Red is my favourite colour. <s>even I</s> I even like black, too. <em>[Not sure what dialect you're studying. In America, we would say "favorite color". Your spelling is the British version.]</em>

…animal?

I like big cats.

…season?

I don't know about seasons because in Colombia there aren´t seasons. I know, it´s very sad.

About my country: Argentina and Buenos Aires

Argentina is a beautiful country that is <s>formed by</s> composed of twenty-three provinces. I only know "Buenos Aires". I grew up there and I can say, without any <s>daubts</s> doubts, that it is a perfect place for tourists.

The other day, I went to the "Bosques de Palermo" (Palermo Forest) where I saw the Rose Garden. Many engineers <s>collaborated</s> were involved in <s>with</s> the creation of this amazing place.<s>, very useful at the moment of taking photos.</s> It is a great place to take photos.

Palermo Forest has a bridge that you can see in many <s>postal</s> postcards. <s>Besides,</s> I <s>saw many britain tourist</s> have seen many British tourists in this place.

EXPLANATIONS

"formed by twenty-three provinces" indicates that the provinces created the country, which is not what you mean.

Most of my other notes relate to grammar issues.

Do my passage have any mistake?

Last weekend, my family <s>had</s> took a trip to the city of Bac Lieu <s>city</s>. It took us an hour to go there by car. First<s>ly</s>, we went to an amusement park. I <s>played</s> rode a roller coaster there. It was very exciting. After that, we had dinner at the restaurant. We ate a lot of seafood such as crabs and lobster<s>, etc</s>. At 9 p.m., we came back home. I loved my trip very much.

Please help me correct my paragraph

Something becomes popular <s>is that it is</s> when it is noticed by a lot of people, to begin with. Gone are the days when someone could share a post on social network such as Facebook, <s>and it</s> attract<s>s</s> a lot of viewers<s>. And that</s> and make the post <s>become</s> popular. It is easier to become popular in some ways, but <s>however</s> very few people use social media platforms. Many people want to follow something new instead. Some of <s>one</s> these new things were recommended by <s>their </s>friends. <s>and they want to look like everyone.</s> No one wants to <s>be</s> feel left out of their group, so they will want to try these things, too. <s>So</s> I think <s>it</s> this effect is called a trend. Sometimes a trend starts when <s>peoples' idol</s> someone people admire does something and <s>generally people</s> others try to imitate it. <s>and then i</s> It can then become<s>s</s> a hot topic. Things become popular <s>maybe being</s> if they earn the trust of many people, are convenient, easy to use or cheap<s>, etc.</s>. Most of all, people don't want to seem left behind <s>be out of date by the look of those around them.</s>

(Good effort! These suggestions help your writing to read better to native speakers.)