About my country: Argentina and Buenos Aires
Argentina is a beautiful country that is formed by twenty- three provinces. I only know "Buenos Aires". I grew up there and I can say, without any daubts, that is a perfect place for tourists.
The other day, I went to the "Bosques de Palermo" (Palermo Forest) where I saw the Rose Garden. Many engineers collaborated with the creation of this amazing place, very useful at the moment of taking photos.
Palermo Forest has a bridge that you can see in many postal. Besides, I saw many britain tourist in this place.
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About my country: Argentina and Buenos Aires
Argentina is a beautiful country that is MADE UP OF twenty- three provinces. I only know Buenos Aires. I grew up there and I can say, without any DOUBTS, that IT is a perfect place for tourists.
The other day, I went to the Bosques de Palermo (Palermo Forest) where I saw the rose garden. Many engineers collaborated ON the creation of this amazing place. [, very useful at the moment of taking photos. <—I am not sure what you mean here]
Palermo Forest has a bridge that APPEARS ON many POSTCARDS . I saw many BRITISH touristS THERE.
Thank you for reading this. I AWAIT your correction.
(Nice, Sofia !)
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About my country: Argentina and Buenos Aires
Argentina is a beautiful country that is formed by composed of twenty-three provinces. I only know "Buenos Aires". I grew up there and I can say, without any daubts doubts, that it is a perfect place for tourists.
The other day, I went to the "Bosques de Palermo" (Palermo Forest) where I saw the Rose Garden. Many engineers collaborated were involved in with the creation of this amazing place., very useful at the moment of taking photos. It is a great place to take photos.
Palermo Forest has a bridge that you can see in many postal postcards. Besides, I saw many britain tourist have seen many British tourists in this place.
EXPLANATIONS
"formed by twenty-three provinces" indicates that the provinces created the country, which is not what you mean.
Most of my other notes relate to grammar issues.
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About my country: Argentina and Buenos Aires
Argentina is a beautiful country that is formed by twenty three provinces. I only know "Buenos Aires". I grew up there and I can say, without any daubts doubt, that is a perfect place for tourists.
The other day, I went to the "Bosques de Palermo" (Palermo Forest) where I saw the Rose Garden. Many engineers collaborated with the creation of this amazing place, very useful at the moment of taking photos it is a very nice place to take photos.
Palermo Forest has a bridge that you can see in many postal postcards. Besides, I saw many britain British tourists in this place.
Thank you for reading this. I wait your correction.
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Very nice, I wish I can visit Bueno Aires one day.
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