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Last weekend,my family had a trip to Bac Lieu city.It took us an hour to go there by car.Firstly,we went to an amusement park.I played roller coaster there.It was very exciting.After that,we had dinner at the restaurant.We ate a lot of seafood such as crabs,lobster,etc.At 9 pm,we came back home.I loved my trip very much
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Last weekend, my family took had a trip to the city of Bac Lieu city.It took us an hour to get go there by car. Firstly, we went to an amusement park. I rode the played roller coaster there. It was very exciting. After that we had dinner at the restaurant. We ate a lot of seafood such as crabs, and lobster,etc.At 9 pm we came back home. I really loved my trip very much
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Do my passage have any mistake?
Last weekend, my family had took a trip to the city of Bac Lieu city. It took us an hour to go there by car. Firstly, we went to an amusement park. I played rode a roller coaster there. It was very exciting. After that, we had dinner at the restaurant. We ate a lot of seafood such as crabs and lobster, etc. At 9 p.m., we came back home. I loved my trip very much.
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I went on a roller coaster
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