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Something becomes popular is that it is noticed by a lot of people , to begin with. Gone are the days when someone share a post on social network such as Facebook and it attracts a lot of viewers. And that post become popular. It is easier to become popular however very few people use social media platforms . Many people want to follow something new . Some of one were recommended by their friend and they want to look like everyone. No one wants to be left out of their group . So I think it is called a trend . Sometimes trend starts when people's idol do something and generally people try to imitate it and then it becomes a hot topic . Things become popular maybe being trust of many people, convenient, easy to use or cheap, etc. Most of all, people don't want to be out of date by the look of those around them.
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Please help me correct my paragraph
Something becomes popular is that it is when it is noticed by a lot of people, to begin with. Gone are the days when someone could share a post on social network such as Facebook, and it attracts a lot of viewers. And that and make the post become popular. It is easier to become popular in some ways, but however very few people use social media platforms. Many people want to follow something new instead. Some of one these new things were recommended by their friends. and they want to look like everyone. No one wants to be feel left out of their group, so they will want to try these things, too. So I think it this effect is called a trend. Sometimes a trend starts when peoples' idol someone people admire does something and generally people others try to imitate it. and then i It can then becomes a hot topic. Things become popular maybe being if they earn the trust of many people, are convenient, easy to use or cheap, etc.. Most of all, people don't want to seem left behind be out of date by the look of those around them.
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When people idol something (don’t need do here)
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