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Takara Yukari is a nick name of course. Major in English Language and Literature in an undergraduate school in Zhuhai, Guangdong Province and preparing for entrance exam to a MA degree in Creative Writing in China. I play computer games in my spare time, and read Chinese online novels as a hobby(named Wuxia in English world, www.qidian.com, www.webnovel.com). Speaks a school-class-type online-game-chat-influenced personalized English dialect, effective communication first and right spelling or grammar second. It's okay to chat with stupid net friends on whatever things, but when it comes to learning, I prefer to have less words to make sure I'm speakin' something important so we don't waste time. Glad to have friends chatting in Chinese or English on QQ. （QQ group only, if you don't have one or have no idea what is a QQ group I would not seem to be somewhat language partner.） Glad to see your annotations and corrections on my whichever-language notes. :) 很高兴在我的笔记上看到你的注释和更正。 私のいずれかのノートにあなたの注釈や訂正を見てうれしい。 Рад видеть твои комментарии и исправления в моих записях. Es bueno ver sus notas y correcciones en mis notas.
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    I don't read what kind of novels I have this seem like strict screening way to ensure that I won't sink in the novels sea, and I cannot remember all of the rules I've been using during the past years but they really work. I don't read what kind of novels: (Referring to Chinese online novels) 1. Without chapter numbers. 2. without chapter names. 3. Having a book title mark in the title. 4. Talking about author's feelings in the first chapter. 5. Saying it's a sequel of some book with a book title mark in the title. 6. Saying the author is a rookie, newbie and need recommending votes in the first chapter. 7. I don't usually read what kind of novels:. -1. Talking mainly about romance. 1. The format of chapter numbers are too strange. 2. Talking about a non related story in the first chapter to the main novel. 3. The protagonist does not show in the first chapter. 4. No conflict shows even a bit in the first chapter. 5. It's only about Chinese online long novels and will be invalid with Japanese light novels and English literary novels, not to mention those non novels. I've been in a novel soliciting hold by douban.com, which needs a novel up to 80-300k words(I mean Chinese characters) in the following 100 days, from April 23rd to August 1st. One chapter with 2000 words each day would be okay, and I just see a new novel which have got 50k words in only 2 hours. (It's 7:45 now and it began at 6:00) It‘s good to hold manuscripts and to have a strike on the very first day of the 100 days period, but this soliciting is titled as Rally. How could one hold a rally when he or she made the most efforts in the first mile? It's the second time for me to write a long novel, I thought I could get at least 10 chapters' manuscripts and a well developed outline. But I got only one and a half chapter, with a one third completed outline. I gave it much time with preparing but it's still more difficult over my heads. When I completed the first chapter I knew this novel would just be another shit on my writer's dream. Problems in it, I can feel most of them but have no idea how to improve this situation, especially I don't want to rewrite the outline and the outlines of the chapters. (Here is mine. Caution that it's all in Chinese.) read.douban.com/reader/column/31933609/chapter/111227933/ Enough complains. I've been away from italki for a week, and it's a pity because the hours with italki would be happy. I'd keep on my writings, both in Chinese and in English.
    April 22, 2019
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    2、马上、就：我马上去做作业。（平时不会用“马上、就”的句式）

    4、由于昨天太累了，我忘记了给你打电话。（句子对。中文中逗号前后两个部分逻辑明显的，不需要连接词。）
    5、关于：关于你的收入在我们的公司，你满意吗？（看得懂。标准汉语中不这么用，不用“关于某事，你有什么看法”这种句子。“关于这件事，就先聊到这里。”）
    6、好像、够：好像我有的钱不够买这些东西。（看得懂。“有”字多余。）
    8、究竟、由：举行明天的活动究竟由谁负责？（不，不这么写。“明天的活动究竟由谁负责”这样就够了，“举行”这俩字填上去反而坏了句子。）

    我似乎脑袋有点发热……和其他人的修改差好多。仅做参考吧。不好意思。

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    April 17, 2019
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    今天虽然有阳光，但是气温还是很低

    今天虽然有阳光，但是气温还是很低，其实早上站在阳台上的时候，看到小下雪（下小雪了），我想了，（我就想：）天啊，天气真的冷啦！

    很快复活节会来了，这里大部分人会买巧克力兔子和蛋，今年超市有黑巧克力兔子，好好吃唷！

    昨天我发现了，上个星期我忘记了吸尘（用词不太标准……应该是清灰，打扫尘土之类的词吧），所以昨天我吸尘和（，）洗厕所，我觉得这样很重要。

    过去几天在工作（上）我学了关于新的事情，一开始我不知道怎么做了，但一会儿后我理解越来越多（好/透彻/明白），好棒唷！

    我发现了大部分小孩很喜欢吃意大利面，所以我很喜欢教他们怎么自己做，因为做意大利面非常简单。


    一些题外话：

    我所在的学校也休复活节，但是我从来没过过，同学们又基本是中国人，所以只当是多放了一天假。小时候兔八哥里演过复活节的相关场景，不过那也只是动画片而已。除了复活节彩蛋之外还有什么，兔子？弄一些兔子的照片？和兔子玩？还是吃兔子？

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    April 15, 2019
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    Some words on italki's note input column and losing scripts I mean the column for users to input words. I just wrote hundred words yesterday about a grammar issue but my computer encountered some problems and I restarted it. Then I remembered that I hadn't finished my composition and left it half way, and italki don't have a auto save function, just like many websites would do. So I lost my draft. It's not that easy to write some thing day by day. And I don't want to keep it just like a diary, a diary writes did and ate. This column limits to 2500 letters only, and that's about 500 hundred words in English. But surprisingly 2500 letters' length support up to around 1200 characters' Chinese, which conveys somewhat more information than English. And the title column limits up to 60 letters. It's relatively long and 60 letters may show as three lines. To write words in Word or WPS, ctrl+c+v following, maybe a good choice. But it makes things complicated. I tried to write long words, like story and notes, in Word files. But the step to open that software just kept me out for it's unnecessary and boring. Ya I'm lazy but there must be a reason, and I could shirk off the responsibility upon it. Losing manuscripts seem usual for a writer, what kind of things he writes, but it surely can be avoided. WPS, the Word in Chinese language although not that good functional, has the auto save ability, as well as Qidian's column for writers. Qidian is a website for readers to read long novels online and for writers to write long novels online and free. And I think, I could just think because I don't usually do, the blog providers and communication apps, whatever the name of the kind is, like twitter and facebook surely support auto save. It takes me 20 to 40 minutes to write a this-kind-of essay. For more information and thoughts provided ones it takes more indeed. And I don't usually shut down my computers and don't suffer cut of electricity very often. So maybe it is acceptable when losing scripts happen? I hope better not. It's true interesting to have the experience of losing scripts sometimes. I've read many writers autobiographies and knew that many of them have experienced it. Losing chapters and even whole book in that years before when the computer was popular. Many writers in China talks about this problem and they have some their own solutions, from auto save WPS to chapter-ial manual saves, from priced specialized software to just give up writing.
    April 15, 2019
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    一位俄罗斯名人

    俄罗斯人常说：“普希金是我们的一切”。为什么呢？他创立了俄罗斯民族文学和文学语言。我们从小就背下来他的诗歌，读他的小说。不管这些作品写的是什么，我们都会发现美的东西。许多年过去了，一个多世纪过去了，而普希金的诗歌和小说去却没有死。他真是俄罗斯的一位名人。


    写得很好，没什么问题。

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    April 12, 2019
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    不用标点符号是极差的习惯。

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    April 12, 2019
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    中国人会这么说吗？谢谢）

    我的爱好.
    我喜欢中国文化和中医。我喜欢研究药用植物。我爱学习外语 - 汉语, 英语, 梵语都喜欢。每天早上六点半我在Skype上学英语。每一天我在家在网上学习汉语（每天我都在家用电脑学汉语）。我们都爱看很有意思的电影（“我们”是谁，前文没有提过，这里很突兀）。我学习弗拉门戈舞。我喜欢练太极拳和气功，因为它有对身体很好（有益）。我喜欢旅游,想去中国和泰国。我们喜欢去饭店吃中国餐（菜/料理）和意大利餐。
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    April 12, 2019
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    April 11, 2019
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    请帮我捡查一下。谢谢。

    我的爱好。
    我有很多爱好，一些爱好依赖由于季节。我喜欢运动。运动对身体很好。冬天我穿溜冰鞋滑行（溜冰），夏天我穿滑轮鞋滑行（滑旱冰）。有时我跟我的同事一起玩彩弹。虽然我喜欢玩彩弹，但是我玩得很少，因为我受了一些青伤。我和我的家人都喜欢骑自行车，也我们也去游泳池游泳。
    我喜欢听音乐，也喜欢跳舞。我跳舞跳得非常好。我会弹吉他。虽然我完成了（念完了）音乐学校，但是我唱歌唱得不太好了。我的朋友们请（让）我不要唱歌。
    我大爱好（最大的爱好）是学习汉语。我想说一口流利的汉语，也想写漂亮的汉字。还差得远呢。
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    April 11, 2019
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