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Hello! My name is Hannah and I am currently a university student living in Canada. I would love to help out with English or Chinese. Feel free to add me! ^_^
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    November 26, 2019
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    Taking a walk

    I like the summer and dry days. But, I don’t like humid weather because It makes me not too hungry and tired easily.
    食欲がなくなるので、疲れやすくなります。

    In this summer, the typhoon came later than usual and continues.
    今年の夏、台風は遅くきたのでまだ続いています。

    That’s why it’s still hot and humid here.
    そういうわけで、ここはまだ暑くて蒸し暑いのです。

    However, from the night to the morning are cool.
    しかしながら、夜から朝にかけては涼しくなっています。

    I thought I can walk in this season and went to Yasaka shrine at Namba on <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">my</s> foot.
    今の季節なら歩けると思ったから、難波の八阪神社まで行ってきました。

    It took 20 minutes at 14:00. This was totally bad.
    14:00に20分くらい歩きました。完全に失敗でした。

    Because I was wearing long pant and shirt, and also leather shoes. Hot, too hot.
    わたしは、長ズボンに長袖シャツ、レザーシューズだったのです。暑い、暑すぎる、、

    I stopped thinking about that and went to take a break at <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">the</s> Namba park nearby.
    わたしは考えるのはやめ、近くの難波公園に行って休憩することにしました。

    ** "stopped to think" makes me think that you stopped walking so you can start thinking. However, I think you meant that you stopped thinking about how hot it was and went to take a break?

    I surprised to sit and look around. -> I was surprised when I sat down and looked around.

    It was not clean and I couldn’t relax.
    辺りを見回して驚きました。きれいじゃないし、リラックスできやしない。

    Soon, I moved to Jankara and enjoyed singing, I forgot today’s bad things.
    すぐにジャンカラに行って歌うことで、嫌なことは忘れることにしました。


    Great work! Overall, I was able to understand what you meant! It's already much colder where I live and I'm starting to miss the warmer weather... What's the picture of? It looks really interesting.
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    September 28, 2019
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    Message me if you need any help! I also speak Mandarin :)
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    August 6, 2019
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    Feel free to contact me if you need help with English!
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    February 27, 2019
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    My Dream (First paragraph)

    It was a kind of popular topic among my friends when I was young. Almost everyone wanted to be somebody, and it was easy for children to admire someone with a clear and impressive dream. I was the same. Under pressure from Chinese-style examinations, talking about dreams became one of my motivations to study hard. But over time, people didn’t talk about it as often. I think it is Not only do their dreams change, but also more and more people they also realize that talking won't make their dreams reality. I have had many different dreams as I grew older. In my early age, I wanted to become an astronaut. When a child starts to know more about the world, they are much likely to be attracted to the unknown. The universe is full of mysteries and I was full of confidence to find them out.

    Hope this helped! 
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    February 26, 2019
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    Diary #6

    I talked about my plan with my friend today, but I could not say what was on my mind precisely. So I'd like to try again here.

    *I think you're specifically talking about career/future plans which might be good to specify since just saying "plan" usually means your plan for today or tomorrow or in the near future. e.g. my plan today is to finish my homework.

    I actually don't have such a huge dream or ambition. I want to work for a famous Japanese multi-national company which is handling Japanese foods as a white collar and spread Japanese food all over the world, especially to Asian countries.

    This is a bit wordy. Would it work if you just say "Japanese multinational food company" or even "food production company"? 


    Honestly, I wanted to do something related to skiing or winter mountain, but few professional people can make money with such a job. I have to support my family, and I want to have kids. So I gave up on this dream.

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    February 25, 2019
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    With a coffee

    I had to skip my lunch break today. My colleague gave me some snacks around noontime so I managed to do work without a break.

    Now, it's a coffee break. I believe McDonald's coffee is a good value.


    I think saying "noon" is more common than "noontime" but that is still correct. You can also say "I managed to work without a break".

    I think "a good value" makes sense. You could possibly also say "a bargain", "a good deal", or "McDonald's coffee is very economical".

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    February 14, 2019
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    White mocha

    I drank a white mocha at Starbucks. You can also say "I had a white mocha at/from Starbucks." Using "at Starbucks" means that you sat down at Starbucks and drank the white mocha. "From Starbucks" just means that you bought the white mocha from Starbucks.


    I know it’s high calorie but I like it!

    I know it’s high in calories but I like it! You can also say "sugary" or "unhealthy" to describe the white mocha. 


    When I feel stress, I take something sweet, then it makes me feel much better.

    When I feel stressed, I order something sweet and it makes me feel much better. Instead of "order", you can also say "buy" or "have". I would probably say "I usually order/buy/have something sweet" since I am describing something that is a habit.  


    But I have to be careful not to put on too much weight!


    Overall, that was really good! Although there were some minor mistakes, it was still very easy to understand. I can totally relate to craving sweet things and worrying about my weight :') 



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    February 14, 2019
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