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White mocha I drank a white mocha at Starbucks. I know it’s high calorie but I like it! When I feel stress, I take something sweet, then it makes me feel much better. But I have to be careful not to put on too much weight!

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White mocha

I drank a white mocha at Starbucks. You can also say "I had a white mocha at/from Starbucks." Using "at Starbucks" means that you sat down at Starbucks and drank the white mocha. "From Starbucks" just means that you bought the white mocha from Starbucks.


I know it’s high calorie but I like it!

I know it’s high in calories but I like it! You can also say "sugary" or "unhealthy" to describe the white mocha. 


When I feel stress, I take something sweet, then it makes me feel much better.

When I feel stressed, I order something sweet and it makes me feel much better. Instead of "order", you can also say "buy" or "have". I would probably say "I usually order/buy/have something sweet" since I am describing something that is a habit.  


But I have to be careful not to put on too much weight!


Overall, that was really good! Although there were some minor mistakes, it was still very easy to understand. I can totally relate to craving sweet things and worrying about my weight :') 



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White mocha

I drank a white mocha at Starbucks.
I know it’s high calorie/high in calories but I like it!
When I feel stress/am under stress/am stressed, I take something sweet, then it makes me feel much better.
But I have to be careful not to put on too much weight !

Unless you're under a lot of stress, and drinking a lot of white mocha, I don't think you'll put on much weight from that.

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White mocha

I´ve just got white mocha at Starbucks. I know it’s high calorie, but I like it!
When I feel stressed, I taste something sweet, then I feel much better.
But I have to be careful or else I´d get fat!

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