Take a walk
I like the summer and dry day.But, I don’t like humid weather.
夏とドライな日は好きだけど、蒸し暑いかは苦手です。
Because It makes me not to hungry and tired easily.
食欲がなくなるので、疲れやすくなります。
In this summer, the typhoon came later than usual and continues.
今年の夏、台風は遅くきたのでまだ続いています。
That’s way it’s still hot and humid here.
そういうわけで、ここはまだ暑くて蒸し暑いのです。
However, from the night to the morning are cool.
しかしながら、夜から朝にかけては涼しくなっています。
I thought I can walk in now season and went to Yasaka shrine at Namba on my foot.
今の季節なら歩けると思ったから、難波の八阪神社まで行ってきました。
It took 20 minutes at 14:00. This was totally bad.
14:00に20分くらい歩きました。完全に失敗でした。
Because I was wearing long pant and shirt, leather shoes. Hot, too hot.
わたしは、長ズボンに長袖シャツ、レザーシューズだったのです。暑い、暑すぎる、、
I stoped to think about that, I went to break at the Namba park nearby.
わたしは考えるのはやめ、近くの難波公園に行って休憩することにしました。
I surprised to sit and look around. It’s not clean and I couldn’t relax.
辺りを見回して驚きました。きれいじゃないし、リラックスできやしない。
Soon I moved to Jankara and enjoyed singing, I forgot today’s bad things.
すぐにジャンカラに行って歌うことで、嫌なことは忘れることにしました。
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Take a walk
I like the summer and dry day.But, I don’t like humid weather. Because It makes me not to hungry and tired easily.
I like summer(s) and dry days, but I don't like humid weather because it makes me tired and not very hungry.
夏とドライな日は好きだけど、蒸し暑いかは苦手です。食欲がなくなるので、疲れやすくなります。
In this summer, the typhoon came later than usual and continues.
This summer, the typhoons came later than usual and are still developing. We don't really say continues when talking about seasons and some weather. You could say hurricane season is ongoing, or hurricane season isn't over.
Example: Hurricane season isn't over yet. or It's still hurricane season. or Hurricane season is ongoing.
今年の夏、台風は遅くきたのでまだ続いています。
That’s why it’s still hot and humid here.
そういうわけで、ここはまだ暑くて蒸し暑いのです。
However, from the night to the morning are cool.
However, nights and mornings are cool. Again, this is just another difference in how we talk about weather.
しかしながら、夜から朝にかけては涼しくなっています。
I thought I can walk in now season and went to Yasaka shrine at Namba on my foot.
I thought I could walk in this weather. I went to the Yasaka shrine in Namba by foot. I walked to the Yasaka shrine in Namba. <- this is more natural.
今の季節なら歩けると思ったから、難波の八阪神社まで行ってきました。
It took 20 minutes at 14:00. This was totally bad. Because I was wearing long pant and shirt, leather shoes. Hot, too hot.
It took 20 minutes at 14:00. It was (awful / horrible / terrible / very bad) because I was wearing long pants, a shirt, and leather shoes. It was hot, too hot.
14:00に20分くらい歩きました。完全に失敗でした。わたしは、長ズボンに長袖シャツ、レザーシューズだったのです。暑い、暑すぎる、、
I stoped to think about that, I went to break at the Namba park nearby.
I stopped to think about that. I took a break at the nearby Namba park.
わたしは考えるのはやめ、近くの難波公園に行って休憩することにしました。
I surprised to sit and look around. It’s not clean and I couldn’t relax.
I was surprised when I sat and looked around. It wasn't clean and I couldn't relax.
辺りを見回して驚きました。きれいじゃないし、リラックスできやしない。
Soon I moved to Jankara and enjoyed singing, I forgot today’s bad things.
Soon after, I went to Jankara and enjoyed singing. I forgot today's bad things.
すぐにジャンカラに行って歌うことで、嫌なことは忘れることにしました。
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Taking a walk
I like the summer and dry days. But, I don’t like humid weather because It makes me not too hungry and tired easily.
食欲がなくなるので、疲れやすくなります。
In this summer, the typhoon came later than usual and continues.
今年の夏、台風は遅くきたのでまだ続いています。
That’s why it’s still hot and humid here.
そういうわけで、ここはまだ暑くて蒸し暑いのです。
However, from the night to the morning are cool.
しかしながら、夜から朝にかけては涼しくなっています。
I thought I can walk in this season and went to Yasaka shrine at Namba on my foot.
今の季節なら歩けると思ったから、難波の八阪神社まで行ってきました。
It took 20 minutes at 14:00. This was totally bad.
14:00に20分くらい歩きました。完全に失敗でした。
Because I was wearing long pant and shirt, and also leather shoes. Hot, too hot.
わたしは、長ズボンに長袖シャツ、レザーシューズだったのです。暑い、暑すぎる、、
I stopped thinking about that and went to take a break at the Namba park nearby.
わたしは考えるのはやめ、近くの難波公園に行って休憩することにしました。
** "stopped to think" makes me think that you stopped walking so you can start thinking. However, I think you meant that you stopped thinking about how hot it was and went to take a break?
I surprised to sit and look around. -> I was surprised when I sat down and looked around.
It was not clean and I couldn’t relax.
辺りを見回して驚きました。きれいじゃないし、リラックスできやしない。
Soon, I moved to Jankara and enjoyed singing, I forgot today’s bad things.
すぐにジャンカラに行って歌うことで、嫌なことは忘れることにしました。
Great work! Overall, I was able to understand what you meant! It's already much colder where I live and I'm starting to miss the warmer weather... What's the picture of? It looks really interesting.
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