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- Fathers vs Mothers<s>They </s> Fathers don’t know the details (details of what?) because <s>from </s> their perception is that the father’s role is to supply the family with food, accommodation, and money.It <s>it </s> is quite shocking when a father doesn’t know his son’s or daughter’s birthday.<s>This was a video on Facebook that I’ve seen today. The </s> Today I saw a video on Facebook in which a reporter asked many dads about the <s>birth’s date </s> birth dates of their children, the names of their teachers, and their favorite subjects.The funniest <s>is </s> moment was when one of those dads didn’t remember his daughter’s birthday, which was yesterday.The answers were positive when it <s>comes </s> came to the mothers. They knew every single detail about their children.Does that mean all those details are the responsibility of the mothers and the fathers are only responsible <s>of</s><s> </s> for providing a good living for the family?*notes: good work! I also saw this video and those dads are the worst!0 votedAugust 14, 20191
- My personalityI am the friendliest of all the personality types. I have a natural optimism towards all aspects of life: the people, the places, and society in general. It is almost impossible for someone to <s>be </s> feel lonely around me, as I love the idea of bringing all individuals into the fold. Taking care of others is my forte and I do it with affectionate gusto. Most of all, I love that secure feeling I get when I am having fun with my loved ones. <s>and </s> If I had one wish, it would be to share that feeling of contentment with everyone.*notes:-1st sentence, I know the subject is right above but it's good to directly note your subject, in this case, 'personality.'-'be' vs 'feel' - we tend to think of 'being' as a physical thing. I changed it because if we're standing next to someone they are technically not alone, but 'feeling lonely' you can do even in a crowd.-last sentence, I think this was technically correct but it didn't read very well.-great use of vocabulary, really well expressed sentiment here :)0 votedJune 13, 20191
- Could you correct me, please?I'd like to share with you <s>one </s> a story which <s>happened </s> took place approximately a month ago.I used to work out in the gym <s>before </s> (unnecessary because you already have "used to") but now I just go <s>for </s> jogging and work out on the street. I always was into sports and I used to think that <s>I'm </s> i was in shape and <s>have </s> had enough strength <s>but </s> until, to my surprise, my co-worker asked me to compete with him in armwrestling. To be honest, I never was good in armwrestling but I was sure that I <s>can </s> could beat this guy because he wasn't a sporty guy at all. And now I want to admit how naive I was when I thought that I could beat him easily. He won the first scramble but I asked him to compete one more time; he agreed and after I <s>putted </s> put in a lot of effort and finally managed to win <s>but anyway </s> I was still frustrated by the fact that I was not strong enough to beat him easily. I've been working out almost half my life and that guy <s>he </s> only started visiting gym recently. <s> Inside me </s> (feelings are always inside so you don't need to say :) I felt ashamed but it gave me <s>stimul </s> motivation to work harder. Now I'm more focused <s>to strength </s> on strengthening my forearms. I also started watching videos about technique. Hopefully it will help;)Thanks for reading this and I would more appreciate if you correct me )*notes: just a few little corrections but pretty good :) just remember to stick with past tense or present (but not both!) in the same sentence ;)0 votedJune 13, 20191
*noteI've always wanted to study arts at college and now I'll be graduating by the end of this year! I'm really happy about it because the last 4 four years ((the rule: if the number is under 11, spell it out ;)) have been extremely interestings interesting and I've grown so much as an artist. I learned new techiniques techniques, how to use new materials, and have been introduced to many different types of art, like calcography, which I like very much! I also found myself working on digital photography and on audiovisual productions. Another thing that I liked about the course was that I could get in touch with many other artists and live togheter together with them almost everyday. I also had the opportunity to participate on in the college's dance group, and for which we did a presentation last November. That experience was amazing and I'll definitely take it with me for the rest of my life. The only thing I think it was boring during these 4 years was that I had to go to another city to study by bus every night. It was really tiring, but worth it.
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- this is good :) mostly just spelling corrections
- Congratulations!!!
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The popularity of people using the internet has created a vastly vast array of consequences in on the psychological and physical health of humans. In my opinion, the solutions with a preventive approach for avoiding being to avoid becoming a victim of these drawbacks could be beneficial.
Navigating over the web could can be useful for a lot of purposes, such as studying a language or communicating with people who are far away of from us. Nevertheless, the excessive use of the internet could have negative effects on psychological health. For instance, there are people who feel less interested in going out with friends because it is more easier to stay in the house and watch a movie. This behaviour could lead to the development of mental illnesses, such as depression. A possible solution could be to make a daily plan of our activities which includes the time we should be using it the internet ((we say 'the internet' instead of 'it' here because the focus of the previous sentence was mental illness, not the main topic)). This has positive effects because we put clear limits to on our actions.
Another disadvantage is related to psychical physical effects, which some some of which of the most common are vision problems and backache. For example, when I used use my gadgates gadgets for 2 hours without a break, my eyes starts tearing and this makes me need to stop it. Also, my muscles are become too tense due to being in the same position for prolonged periods of time. An effective strategy to avoid these physical problems is to exercised exercise daily because with this simple habit people stay away from their cellphone at least for 30 minutes.
In conclusion, it is a fact that the internet is exceedingly fashionable to use nowadays. However, an excessive use of it could make create psychological and physical problems on for people. But preventive measures could be efficient to in helping people avoid them.0 votedApril 4, 20191March 23, 2019
I and My parents and I went to a phone shop to change our smartphones. My parent's present previous smartphones were the first one for them their first, but they didn't use their smartphones well. So they bought a flip phones. However, they can't access a web pages by using their flip phones, so they bought a new tablet.
I exchanged my smartphone, but the new one is heavier than my previous smartphone.0 votedApril 4, 20190Flying motorcycle
JetPack Aviation, a company in the United States, is developing a recreational flying motorcycle named ‘Speeder.’
On their website, they have started to take taking preorders, limited to 20.
They intend to build other versions for military, transportation, and emergency use.
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This is great news for people who love heights, like me.
It must be so exciting to ride it in the sky and enjoy breathing fresh air.
I am just wondering… if everyone starts to use this kind of vehicles vehicle, the sky might be will the sky become too crowded?*note: This sounds amazing!
0 votedApril 4, 20191
