My First Book On English That I Read!

Today I'm gonna going to ("gonna", "gunna", "wanna", etc should be avoided - even in informal writing. We say it, but adults only rarely write that in English.) write about the first book on English that I read.

First of all, pals  I'm a really big fan of Harry Potter and etc.!

The title of this book is Harry Potter and the  Philosopher Stone (there's that's not an advertisement or promo, lol).

When I decided to buy a book on in English, I had been studying English by myself for 8 or 10 months.

Before I got this book in my arms, I had thought that reading on in English is simple. But when I started to read this book, I understood that reading books on in English is like a challenge for those who are learning English.

Nevertheless, I've read this book for a month after the purchase.

The book gave me an indeed large output as  a large lot of work for a person who is learning English!

The more pages I read, the more it increased my dictionary of English words.

By writing this these simple sentences, I have tried to describe my point of view on my first book on in English, that I have read!

Thank you so much for correcting and fixing my entry. With your help I'm getting more confident in English!

You've really expressed yourself really well ! Congrats on reading your first book - that's a huge accomplishment.

My First Book That I Read In English!

Today I'm gonna write about the first book that I read in English.

First of all, pals, I'm really big fan of Harry Potter and ect.!

The title of this book is: Harry Potter and Philosopher Stone (this is not a advertisement or promo, lol).

When I decided to buy a book in English, I had already been studying English by myself for 8 to 10 months.

Before I had this book in my arms, I had thought that reading in English would be simple. However, when I started to read this book, I understood that reading a book in English would be a challenge after all.

Nevertheless, I read this book in just one month after I purchased it.

Indeed, this book gave me an large output (do you mean "this book was a great aid for me to learn and improve my English"?) as for person, who learning English!

The more pages that I read, the more vocabulary that I learned.

By writing these simple sentences, I tried to describe my point of view of my first English book that I have successfully read.

Thank you so much for correcting and fixing my entry. With your help I'm getting more confident in English!