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likes and dislikes
I like to dance all kinds of musical genres, I like lions, polar bears and whales, I like horror stories and mystery at its best because I know interesting cases, I like to go out to eat with my friends or have a coffee and talk, I like Italian food a lot, I like volleyball too much and I practice it many years ago. I do not like lies, I do not like fish or beets, I do not like people who are believed and cranky, I do not like to live in a hurry, I do not like insects and reptiles, I do not like warm weather because I do not like like to sweat constantly.Your word choices are good, but your sentences are too long. There are too many thoughts in each sentence. Suggest you make them smaller like this:
I like to dance to all kinds of musical genres.
I like lions, polar bears and whales.
I like horror stories and interesting mysteries.
I like to go out to eat with my friends, or just have coffee and talk.
I like Italian food a lot.
I like volleyball a lot and I have played it for many years. (I believe this is the thought you were trying to convey)
I do not like lies.
I do not like fish or beets
I do not like people who are cranky (Not sure what you meant by "believed."
I do not like to rush. (The you are trying to construct about life in a hurry would be difficult to make using "I don't like... ."
I do not like insects or reptiles.
I do not like hot weather, I don't want to constantly sweat.
You could combine a few thoughts into one sentence if you wanted to. Such as, "I like to dance and I also like to eat Italian food."
Or, I do not like cranky people or people who lie.
Hope this helps!
Jerry
0 votedSeptember 8, 20180my My free time
I spend most of my time with my family and enjoy reading the books in my room. I love the coffee in the corner of my room in my room. Sometimes, I try to finish my duties housework or chores, so I can watch many movies. and s Sometimes I go to my grandfather's house to spend time with my grandmother. A She has cancer and she that wants to talk or sit with someone to forget what is happening to her or and the pain she is suffering. because of the diseaseCoffee in the corner of my room. Coffee maker in the corner of my room?
For household work use either housework or chores.
Then, split that sentence for better understanding. Too many thoughts in one sentence.
I took out "because of the disease" as we already know she has cancer.
Hope this helps,
Jerry
0 votedSeptember 5, 20180Hi, my name is Cirill i`m I'm 46 years old, and i starting I started learning English 30 years after leaving school 30 years ago. I am hoping my new language will scholl to help me change jobs.
I work in a print house and prepare do prepress files to for printing. I work in the following programs: CorelDraw, Adobe Illustrator, InDesign, Acrobat with PitStop and Heidelberg Signa. I`m verry very tired from of it. May bee Perhaps sameone someone will be interested proffesional comunication, or we just talk. In talking to me about a change of professions.
"Make text" helped me as an online translator and i hopу I hope that with you help i I can soon do without it.
Also it wold would be interesting interested to talk about the history of the USSR and WWII.Cirrill,
If you are using this note to apply for a new job, I would suggest that you do not tell the employer that you are tired of your current job. Say that you believe it's time to develop new skills and put your current skills to better use. You would like a new challenge.
Just my thoughts,
Jerry
0 votedSeptember 5, 20181- If I directly, or indirectly, hurt you (I was negligent) I could be liable (responsible) for the damages you suffer. I would be “liable” for your damages. But You can also be a responsible party (person) for the action, even if you didn’t do the action (the wrong ) yourself. I could be held responsible for something my employee (or child) did; I could be held “liable” for his/her actions. I may have to pay for the actions of people who report to me. They represent me, they are my agent. It is a legal question and by no means black or white. Ultimately decided in a court.0 votedSeptember 5, 20180
Stop with wanna. Not a word. Want to ...
Surendra,
Wanna is dialectal contraction of "want to." It is an informal pronunciation of the words "want to." It is a regional or social variation. I'm certain that it comes about because saying "want to" quickly, easily sounds like "wanna." My personal belief is that "wanna" is fine for everyday spoken English. However, I would NEVER use it in written English.
Hope this helps!
0 votedSeptember 5, 20180E-MAIL
Hi Sarah ,
I am writing ,because I need to ask for information about holiday the holidays and I have got a lot of travel preferences.
First of all, my family and I prefer going want to go to Kenya, (remove comma) because in this place there are they have the best safaris in the world. In addition (Sugges Also instead of In addition), last year my sister-in-law was there in last year and she recommended us this place to us. Also And, my children are keen on animals!
Second, I know Kenya is much more expensive than others places. We are going to go four persons There will be four of us traveling: my husband, I ,my daughter, and my son and myself. I need to know the prices, because my sister-in -law spoke me said it would be about 1200€,(remove comma) for each person.
Third, M my family and I would like to be stay in a hotel, because it is much more comfortable than an apartment. In addition (more natural) we will also go to the hotel to rest, sleep(rest and sleep, about the same, I'd take one out) and have a shower. We will be in Kenya about one week.Your sentences are good, I just make some changes to make them sound more natural. Watch the spaces. Do not put a space before a comma but DO put a space after every comma and period. Nice work!
Four,we want travelling in a plane,because it is shorter than othetrs transportation.Last week I was looking in Internet and It takes me about eight weeks to get from Madrid to Nairobi.In my opinion is a lot of time.0 votedSeptember 2, 20180Things that make me happy
A decent night's sleep makes me very happy. When I sleep at least 8 hours a night I weak up with energy, because of this my levels of produtivity productivity are high and I get all my tasks done sooner than expected even before I expect. The last time that I had a decent night’s sleep I read around ok but better word would be "about" 60 pages of an academic book, I wrote 10 pages of an essay, I watched a movie with my friend, and, I even had time to cook my own dinner. Also, when I sleep bad when I sleep poorly I spent spend all day looking for something somewhere to lay down, and I frequently I have a headache headeach. In other words, when I sleep well at night I can enjoy the day better and my attention is much better. my night’s sleep is in order I could enjoy the day paying better attencion in my activities and in myself.Suggest you break up your sentence like this: The last time that I had a decent night's sleep I read about 60 pages of an academic book. I wrote 10 pages of of an essay. I wateched a movie with my friend, and, I even had time to cook my own dinner.
Too many thoughts in one sentence.
0 votedAugust 29, 20181
