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my free time I spend most of my time with my family and enjoy reading the books in my room. I love the coffee in the corner of my room in my room. Sometimes I try to finish my duties, watch many movies and sometimes go to my grandfather's house to spend time with my grandmother. A cancer that wants to talk or sit with someone to forget what is happening to her or the pain she is suffering because of the disease

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my My free time

I spend most of my time with my family and enjoy reading the books in my room. I love the coffee in the corner of my room in my room. Sometimes,  I try to finish my duties housework or chores, so I can watch many movies. and s Sometimes I go to my grandfather's house to spend time with my grandmother. A She has cancer and she that wants to talk or sit with someone to forget what is happening to her or and the pain she is suffering. because of the disease


Coffee in the corner of my room. Coffee maker in the corner of my room?

For household work use either housework or chores.

Then, split that sentence for better understanding. Too many thoughts in one sentence.

I took out "because of the disease" as we already know she has cancer.

Hope this helps,

Jerry


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The last line of your paragraph sounds like you wrote it in Arabic and then copied and pasted it into Google Translate. You do know that I am not the only one who is going to read this, don’t you?

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