Things that make me happy
A decent night's sleep makes me very happy. When I sleep at least 8 hours a night I weak up with energy, because of this my levels of produtivity are high and I get all my tasks done even before I expect. The last time that I had a decent night’s sleep I read around 60 pages of an academic book, I wrote 10 pages of an essay, I watched a movie with my friend and I even had time to cook my own dinner. Also, when I sleep bad I spent all day looking for something to lay down and frequently I have headeach. In other words, when my night’s sleep is in order I could enjoy the day paying better attencion in my activities and in myself.
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Things that make me happy
A decent night's sleep makes me very happy. When I sleep at least 8 hours a night I weak up with energy, because of this my levels of produtivity productivity are high and I get all my tasks done sooner than expected even before I expect. The last time that I had a decent night’s sleep I read around ok but better word would be "about" 60 pages of an academic book, I wrote 10 pages of an essay, I watched a movie with my friend, and, I even had time to cook my own dinner. Also, when I sleep bad when I sleep poorly I spent spend all day looking for something somewhere to lay down, and I frequently I have a headache headeach. In other words, when I sleep well at night I can enjoy the day better and my attention is much better. my night’s sleep is in order I could enjoy the day paying better attencion in my activities and in myself.Suggest you break up your sentence like this: The last time that I had a decent night's sleep I read about 60 pages of an academic book. I wrote 10 pages of of an essay. I wateched a movie with my friend, and, I even had time to cook my own dinner.
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