I Will Venmo You

Could you please correct my English? I went to a bank to send money to my friend. Banks charge a fee when we send money to a different bank. I remember <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">“venmo.”</s>("Venmo".) If I could tell my friend that I would venmo(Venmo is always capitalized because it is a proper noun. You are using it as a verb here. This is colloquially acceptable as informal language mostly in speaking. If this were a formal document or professional email even, I would not use it this way.) her, it would be handy. There is no fee to send money using <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">venmo</s>(Venmo). However, Japan is a cash society, so such services haven’t been that popular here in Japan. I don’t think the <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">venmo</s>(Venmo)system is available here. Do you often <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">venmo</s>(Venmo) someone?

Growing up

Last Christmas I was wondering about what I'll be doing in the next year(Recommend: 'next year'), and now... Now I'm so freakin' proud of myself<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">.</s>(!)

I've done a lot of things, even stuff I've never considered as concrete objectives have become reachable in these months (like getting(Recommend: 'reaching' 'achieving' or 'getting to')the <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">intermidiate</s>(intermediate) level in English and also in Spanish), and that's all because I <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">grow</s>(grew) up so much, but not just physically, even mentally.

Last year, whatever seems to be in anyways complicate(Recommend: 'seemed complicated') quite scared me, but now I feel like I can do anything I want to do.

And call me crazy, but I won't stop here: the more confident I become, the more things I wanna do.

My New Vocabulary for Today Part 106

Hi, I'm trying to make some sentences using the new vocabulary I learnt today.

If there are any grammar mistakes and/or weird word choices, please correct them. Thanks.

1) Why don't you use pre-prepared frozen(we usually just say 'frozen' It is understood that it was frozen or prepared ahead of time.) of processed food?

2) A pupil takes part in a cramming(cramming means to study a lot of information in a short amount of time. This use does not make sense to me.)school.

3) He took the blame for the accident and got fired.

4) Armed robbers raid a security depot.

5) I've got blisters on my fingers by working.('I get blisters on my fingers by working' or 'I've got blisters on my fingers from working.')

6) Blisters have broken many times and <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">those </s>have become callouses.

7) I used a google map('a Google map' if you mean some map made by Google. If you mean the normal GPS app then we say 'I used Google Maps') too much today and my phone has run out (of battery).

8) Lack of solidarity is in hot water.(I do not know what you mean here)

9) When he boasted <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">of</s>(about) himself(,) I <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">would always </s>complimented <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">for </s>him.

10) He moaned last night because he was under the weather.

11) The work is a piece of cake but(,) it's not my cup of tea.

12) You should keep an eye on him, he is a dark horse.(Grammar is correct but I don't know what you mean by this.)

13) I'm working against the clock so I always put my foot in it.(Grammar is correct but not sure what you mean to say here.)

14) I'm not good at a small talk with strangers.

Back Pain Breakthrough Reviews

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++Afrika(Unless this is the name of the event, we spell the continent, 'Africa')Burn 2019

Hi folks!

A year ago I took a part in (the) Dragon Burn Festival (Chinese Burn). There I made a design(Did you make a creative piece of art, a 'design' or did you make a 'plan' which is to set an intention?) that I will go (to) Afrika Burn next year. And I did it!

Many people asked me "how was it?" Well, there is no one adjective which can reflect all the experiences I had. Afrika Burn is a place where you don't have time to take pictures. You just want to absorb all the magic happening around. Here is my short video.

Nothing informative, just vibes!

https://vimeo.com/346404297

Read this 15 Minute Manifestation review

T.V free

This is a summary of an <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">artical</s>(article) I have read.

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Have you ever thought about living with out <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">T.V ?</s>(TV?) It is seems quite impossible because people get addicted to it(,) and it has a <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">great </s>profound effect on their daily life . <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">On the artical</s>(In the article), the author mentioned that, in the summer, she <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">has </s>once unplugged the <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">T.V</s>(TV) for a month<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> </s>, but now she made it more sophisticated(Not sure what you mean here) than before when she decided to live the whole winter <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">with out</s>(without) <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">T.V .</s>(TV.) She was wondering if she would feel lonely or suffer a bad time, but what happened was totally different from her expectation<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> </s>. She actually <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">succeed</s>('succeeded' is the correct tense, but I don't think this is the correct word for what you mean to say) when she found herself spending more time with her friends with whom she used to spend less time before, reading more books , having enough time to sleep , and start doing volunteer work almost every week instead every few months(This is a run-on sentence. Break it into smaller sentences). New experiments are difficult in the beginning(,) but in time they get easier<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> </s>.