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one day Anna had spent the whole morning in washing cloth. It was nearly lunch time, so she decided to go to the farm for picking some tomatoes, She was just doing her job when she heard a noise in a sudden.Then she saw an animal which was a cat-like animal. She knew it was not a cat because it was too much huge. The animal suddenly ran away and she thought is was going to attack her, She dropped her blanket and shouting. Hearing the sound, the animal ran away with a start, after which, Anna cried and ran all the way home. She told her neighbours that what she saw but they did not believe. She also telephoned the police but they were non taken seriously.

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Anna had spent the whole morning in washing cloth(not sure what you mean). It was nearly lunch time, so she decided to go to the farm for picking(to pick) some tomatoes,(.) She was just doing her job('just doing her/his/my/your job' is a collocation and is not appropriate here. Recommend: 'She was working the garden' or 'She was gathering tomatoes') when she heard a noise in a sudden(suddenly heard a noise).Then she saw an animal which was a cat-like animal(Recommend: 'Then she saw an animal that was cat-like.' or 'Then she saw a cat-like animal.'). She knew it was not a cat because it was too much huge('too big' or 'huge'). The animal suddenly ran away and she thought is was going to attack her(if it is running away then why would she think it is going to attack her? Maybe she thought it was going to attack her, but then it ran away.),(.) She dropped her blanket and shouting(shouted/screamed). Hearing the sound, the animal ran away with a start, after which, Anna cried and ran all the way home. She told her neighbours(neighbors) that what she saw(,) but they did not believe (her). She also telephoned the police but they were non taken(did not take her) seriously.

Nice action sequence. I wonder what she saw. Maybe some big cat predator. They usually run away, it's true. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.

-Jeff

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