Winter Ski
I was born and spent my childhood near the sea. I love the sea, but when I saw the mountains in first time it became my passion especially winter mountains. Black, white and grey color of winter is amazing. I realy like active rest. So, my favorite kind of active rest is winter ski. I don`t have a talent to this kind of sport. Who love the skis like me?
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Winter Ski
I was born and spent my childhood near the sea. I love the sea, but when I saw the mountains in(for the) first time it became my passion(,) especially winter mountains. Black, white and grey color(colors) of winter is(are) amazing. I realy(really) like active rest. So, my favorite kind of active rest is winter ski. I don`t have a talent to(for) this kind of sport. Who love the skis(loves to ski) like me?
Sounds great! I like your bit about "active rest". Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.
-Jeff
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