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    practice English..

    Actually  I am working in Hong Kong!! and I have many lucky (say "I am very lucky" or "I have so much luck" - "Lucky" is an adjective, so you can't say "many" before it)   ...so I think I am happy:)
    But I thought I need more confidence in myself,Because I want to more shine  (say "shine more" - "more" always goes after the verb, for example: I need to study more, I want to play more)  as a person.
    So I need for (you don't need "for" here) confidence and I want to more speak (same as before - say "speak more") in English.

    Great job! Keep up the practice :)

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    December 20, 2018
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    あなたの意見に、体育を義務付けるべきですか? Please correct my Japanese! はい、べきです。今、アメリカ人は世界中一番太い国民です。大人はあまり運動をしません。みんな事務賞で働いて行って、一日中座っています。これは体にわるいです。だから、子ども時まで、運動をすろ習慣があるべきです。学校で、子どもは運動の仕方をならいます。大人時で、続けます。だから体育はとても大切です。
    December 20, 2018
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    日本語 - please correct me! 私は兄弟が三人います。17歳妹と16歳弟と14歳弟がいます。妹はとても頭がよくて、きれいな、有能な人です。彼女はチェロを引きます。いい大学校に受かるために、毎日3時間まで練習します。16歳の弟も頭がいい。しかし、あまり勉強しません。彼は大学で勉強するか分かりません。スケートボードをすることが大好きです。14歳の弟は可愛い男の子です。学校はちょっと難しくて、頑張ります。ちょっと変な子どもです。新しい音楽を聞かなくて、ジャズがしか聞きません。毎日、ジャズを聞いている間に自転車に乗ります。
    August 8, 2018
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    Friends. Blessing or malediction  curse

    I remember my mother saying to me that to drink alcohol and smoke is not healthy. So I've always  run ("runned" is not a word - present "run", past "ran", past participle "run") away from those (plural) things in my life.
    When I was a teenager, I had a friend who smoked marijuana. Yes. It is true.
    I remember that we were walking around the neighborhood, and she took something from her pocket and offered to me. I didn't know what it was, she explained it to me but I didn't want to try. THANKS MOM ♥  (If you already have "didn't", which is in past, you don't need the word after to be in past, just put it in present)
    The point is, Who have you chosen to be your friend? Is you friend a blessing or curse?
    I had two kinds of friends in my entire life. The ones who likes to do things correctly and the others who likes to choose the wrong path. I've never seen either  (both is for positive sentences, either for negative ones. e.g. - I've seen both steal. I've never seen either steal.) stealing but I remember seeing my friend using drugs.
    There is a quote which says "love is just beautiful, when we find someone who makes us become  better than we are".
    I believe that this quote fits, too, for friends.
    I've always said to my friends that we have to be always a blessing in the others life. I would be ashamed if I know that I leave someone to the wrongly path.
    I've heard that we are a little of people who we live (this doesn't sound right, but I'm not sure what you mean) and I know that friends are included in that. If you choose good people to be your friends, you probably become good, too. Because there is a big probability for you to walk in the same good path.
    On the other hand, if you choose people who don't like to choose the good path, you will probably have problems soon.
    Our parents instruct us about the right and the wrong path, but to choose them depends on our character and what we want for the future of our lives.
    I've always wanted to be a blessing to people who are around me and I would not like to know that anyone chooses the wrong path by the influence of my words or behavior.
    Love is just beautiful when we find someone who transforms us in something better than we are.


    Great job! I think that part of the reason no one corrected it soon is because it's so long; people look at it and decide it will take too much time to correct it. Write shorter things, or post them in two parts, and I think that will help them get corrected faster.

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    August 8, 2018
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    SUMMER IN SPAIN

    This year Summer is especially hot. Today in my city there are it is 38º. It's very difficult to sleep in the night unless you have air conditioning or a fan. If you want to visit Spain you should do it when the weather is better, not in August.

    Great job!

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    August 7, 2018
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    August 7, 2018
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    How Cinema Presented History

    I think that films are a beneficial source for historical information. A film might contains some cinematic adjustments to attract the crowd or to imitate modernism, but the plot is based on the reality.
    I think that cinema succeeded in its presentation of main historical events that had changed the history forever، for example, king's Henry's decision to separate (maybe "end" would be better than separate) the English religious submission to the Vatican and establishing the Anglican church. 
    Another remarkable event was the abdication of the throne by Edward Vlll for his brother George Vl over his insistence to marry an American divorced lady, Walis Simpson.
    These were two examples in which they were presented in a successful films, The Other Boulin Girl and King's Speech.

    Let me know if you have any questions, hope that helps!


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    August 6, 2018
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    letter to my friend

    Thank you, my dear Michael. We had a great time together in Paris. (The expression is "to have a great time") My journey home was pretty awful because in the plane (you are talking about one specific plane here, so "the") a little baby screamed mostly the whole flight.("fly" is a verb, the noun is "flight") But the rest of the journey was normal. I even met my old friend on a bus when I came home. (we say "in a car", but "on a bus" "on a plane", "on a train")
    Now I'm sitting in my apartment and remembering our meeting. This couple days with you was a wonderful time for me. The great city with old history, famous places and a best friend are necessary for a lovely journey!
    I sent you a little surprise yesterday. I hope you will be enjoy this. It should be delivered in a few days. (use the past participle of the verb "deliver")
    Now I'm spending the weekend with my family and finishing an apple cake. This is a recipe of my grandmother.
    I will be glad if you send me a letter when you will get my present. (you never need to put "will" inside a clause starting with "when") 

    with love,
    Anastasia.

    Great job! I hope everything I said makes sense!

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    August 3, 2018
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    Japanese - please correct me! 私のおばあさんはとてもすごい女の人です。1940にモンタナの農場でうまれました。農場の近くにあまり人がありませんでした。おばあさんの学校に20人だけ子どもがいました。彼女の家族は農場でたくさん働きました。小さい子どもときは、おばあさんがたまごを集めました。13歳から、お父さんとはたけでピックアップを運転しました。16歳から、トラークトレーを運転しました。18歳ときに、大学へ行って、音楽を勉強しました。ピアノを弾かて、歌ってがとても上手です。大学に、私のおじいさんに会いました。お見合いデートでした。結婚しって、三人子どもは生めました。次回につづく。。。
    August 3, 2018
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    Hi! I am learning Japanese, and I speak English (I am an English teacher). I would be glad to help you with English, speaking or writing, if you could help me with Japanese. Let me know! (I don't speak Chinese though, sorry.)
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    August 2, 2018
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