letter to my friend
Thank you, my dear Michael. We spend a great time together in Paris. My journey home was pretty amful because in a plane a little baby screamed mostly all fly. But the rest journey was normal. I even met my old friend in a bus when came home.
Now I'm sitting in my apartment and remembering our meeting. This couple days with you was for me a wonderful time. The great city with old history, famous places and best friend are necessary for a lovely journey!
I sent you a little surprise yesterday. I hope you will be enjoy this. It should be delivery in a few days.
Now I'm spending weekend with my family and finishing a apple cake. This is a recipe of my grandmother.
I will be glad if you spend me a letter when you will get my present.
with love,
Anastasia.
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letter to my friend
Thank you, my dear Michael. We had a great time together in Paris. (The expression is "to have a great time") My journey home was pretty awful because in the plane (you are talking about one specific plane here, so "the") a little baby screamed mostly the whole flight.("fly" is a verb, the noun is "flight") But the rest of the journey was normal. I even met my old friend on a bus when I came home. (we say "in a car", but "on a bus" "on a plane", "on a train")Now I'm sitting in my apartment and remembering our meeting. This couple days with you was a wonderful time for me. The great city with old history, famous places and a best friend are necessary for a lovely journey!
I sent you a little surprise yesterday. I hope you will be enjoy this. It should be delivered in a few days. (use the past participle of the verb "deliver")
Now I'm spending the weekend with my family and finishing an apple cake. This is a recipe of my grandmother.
I will be glad if you send me a letter when you will get my present. (you never need to put "will" inside a clause starting with "when")
with love,
Anastasia.
Great job! I hope everything I said makes sense!
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