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practice English.. Actually I am working in Hong Kong!! and I have many lucky...so I think I am happy:) But I thought I need more confidence myself,Because I want to more shine as a person. So I need for confidence and I want to more speak in English.

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practice English..

Actually  I am working in Hong Kong!! and I have many lucky (say "I am very lucky" or "I have so much luck" - "Lucky" is an adjective, so you can't say "many" before it)   ...so I think I am happy:)
But I thought I need more confidence in myself,Because I want to more shine  (say "shine more" - "more" always goes after the verb, for example: I need to study more, I want to play more)  as a person.
So I need for (you don't need "for" here) confidence and I want to more speak (same as before - say "speak more") in English.

Great job! Keep up the practice :)

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Thank you!! for your comment!! I'll do my best from now on!!
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