Telling the truth or not - review it <s>pls!</s> please:)
To tell<s>ing</s> the truth or not is a serious question which has been discussed <s>amid</s> among groups of ethics, theology or psychology (better: ethics, theology, and psychology groups) since the first century <s>of history</s> AD. It is a question that has not been yet <s>answered satisfyingly</s> satisfactorily answered and which is not likely to be anytime soon. As I see it, telling the truth depends on the circumstances. Although it is not useful in any time ( better: all the time, or, in every situation), I believe we should attempt to be honest.
It is an undeniable fact <s>amid </s> among* psychologists that one of the most important possessions of a person is a relationship (better: one of the most important possessions a person can have is a..) There is a high <s>extent</s> (number/occurence) of stories in which people speak about how the truth made their relationships better or how hiding the truth destroyed it. Considering these stories, the fundamentals of a relationship seems to be the truth in every circumstance<s>s</s>.
<em style="color: rgb(136, 136, 136);">"amid" generally implies something that floats, something in the atmosphere, or something abstract</em>
There is a second part of people's <s>life</s> lives that is worth mentioning: personality. It is <s>a</s> common knowledge that personality improves by going through difficult situations. Of course, <s>it is inevitable for improvement that</s> improvement is inevitable when the person<s> be inclined to</s> has the inclination to adjust to the situation and try to exploit all of the possible opportunities that are available. Therefore,<s> it has</s> there are benefits when people tell the truth <s>for their chief</s> (namely/mainly?)in the event of having <s>done</s> made a mistake. In addition (or, Additionally), people in this case stand less chance to be hired.
Some people argue that telling the truth can destroy both relationships and personalities. They point out the fact that lots of people divorce after having told what they really thought about their partner or having cheated on their partner. Another example they show is <s>the</s> a surprise. There is no doubt that when somebody organizes a surprise party, he will not tell it to the person for whom he is doing it.
In my opinion, these arguments are appropriate and true. However, I insist on telling the truth. In terms of relationships, telling the truth is necessary in the beginning<s> of it</s>. It is a common mistake that people are not honest <s>to</s> with each other when they start a relationship. Therefore, I agree that a small lie is allowed when people intend to surprise someone.
In conclusion, telling the truth makes people's relationships and personalities <s>thriving </s>thrive. <s>Despite</s> Aside from/ Excepting/With the exception of surprises, not telling the truth will not result in benefits.
<em style="color: rgb(136, 136, 136);">Keep writing, very good! Let me know if you've got questions.</em>