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Presentation I am a junior chemical engineer, looking forward to expand my professional experience. While I was a student I have done internships in quality and production departments, however, now that my bachelor's degree is finished, I would like to start a solid professional career within a specific sector, and specialize as my job requieres it. For me it is essential that the profesional career I develop, allows me to grow up as I get achievements and skills. Finally, for me would it be vital being able to have a dynamic job which challenge me continously and let me work at an international level.

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I am a junior chemical engineer, looking forward to expanding my professional experience.

While I was a student I did have done internships in quality and production departments, however, now that my bachelor's degree is finished, I would like to start a solid professional career within a specific sector, and specialize as my job requires requieres it.

For me It is essential that the professional career I develop, allows me to grow up as I achieve get achievements and acquire skills.

Finally, for me would it is be vital being able to have a dynamic job which challenges me continuously and lets me work at an international level.
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I am a junior chemical engineer, looking forward to expand my professional experience.

While I was a student I have done did (or completed, sounds nice) internships in quality and production departments, however, now that my bachelor's degree is finished, I would like to start a solid professional career within a specific sector, and specialize as my job requieres it.

For me it is essential that the professional career I develop, allows me to grow up as I get (or gain) achievements and skills.  (<-- this sentence is correct, but you do not need to use "professional" when describing career. It is better to say "...the career I develop," )

Finally, for me would it be it would be vital being to be able to have a dynamic job which challenges me continuously and lets me work at an international level.

Good job!

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