Finding a sales manager

Today I examined looked through several CVs in order to find some good candidates to for  a sales manager position that which  had become vacant in my department.
It was really exciting, well, as always. When you're taking looking at someone's CV and begin to reading it, you're feel  like you are exploring the ones  person's life. It is just a professional part of the personality. but it contains goals, and faults, and victories - all the stuff that made this employee what he is himself.
I don't like history but I enjoy reading CVs, because they are the mirrors of what the person has achieved accomplished in his career and what type of employee  worker he is now. And All of this has to be the guide to the decision as to whether the man will be successful in a new job.l succeed in his future job.

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IELTS writting task

The two graphs demonstrate the main reason for study(ing) in different aged students and the amount of financial support the students received from employers.

Overall, the number of students studying for  a career and for interest,  were in inverse proportion among  to the age. There was 80 percent of people under 26 years old of age study for  a career while only 10 percent of people study for interest. People studying for a career steadily decreased, and   which is the as same as people studying for interest in the age 40-49 age group(40 percent). In the age over 49 age group, the percentage of people studying for a career fell to 18 percent. The percentage of people studying for interest steadily rose from 10 percent and reached to 70 percent over the age group. According to The second graph shows the support by the employer was 60 percent in the group of age under 26 of age. It declined to 30 percent in the age 30-39 age group, and then increased steadily to 40 percent in the age over 49 and over age group.

Small Drive  Driving

Last night, I enjoyed a small driving drive to Kiyosato which where is among mountains and just an hour away from my house. Although I couldn't watch the beautiful stars, I was refreshed by the cool air. The highland is a good place to go to in such a hot summer.

IELTS 2

It is popular for young people to have having a gap year to work or travel between finishing high school and starting university studies.
The gap year allows young people travel around and see the different parts of the world. The advantage is that people can learn new things from travelling. For example, I am now on a working holiday in Australia, and  making many friends from different countries. We share and learn how to respect  our cultures and learn to respect to different cultures. Another advantage of having a gap year is that I have become more independent and understand that I should believe in myself. In the past, my parents would arrange all things everything for me, the only thing I needed to do was follow their plan.But However, in Australia I have to learn how to live independently by myself, so I need to know how to cook and how to I can rent a house in English on my own.
There are also some disadvantages in having a gap year. If there is something means a lot to the young people's family, and he or she is traveling around, it will be sad that he or she is not there to stand by their side. If something important happens back home with the family, it may be sad not to be able to be there to give support. My grandmom is suffering from cancer, and I was not there when she was in had an operation. Another disadvantages is that it the cost of  travel may be high  cost a lot for some families. on travel for some family. Some people spend almost 2 months salary to for a working holiday in Australia. It is very expensive for some people. After they come back to their home country, some companies think a gap year is not necessary, so that person may be considered a time waster.  they may be considered as time wasting people.

Some countries encourage young people to have a gap year to understand what they really want. Although there are some advantages and disadvantages on taking a gap year.   As long as people think carefully and understand the risks, people should be have no regrets for the decision they made.

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