People should never eat meat because raising animals for human consumption is cruel.
Public opinion tells us more and more times that breeding animals for human consumption is a bad habit and I agree in part with this opinion. On one hand, livestock is breeding in small space and is usually raising with antibiotics and drugs, but on the other hand, human being is omnivorous, therefore we should eat meat. In my opinion, we can try to raising animals in traditional ways like our grandfathers did.
We raise our livestock in farms which gather too animals in little space. In these places cattle do not do any kind of activity and there is not any possibility to go about freely in the countryside. Farms are a kind of prison for animals and this is very brutal and sad.
Nowadays, the increasing of the population all over the world requests more food which pushes the farmers to rise their production. How does the modern society answer to this huge request? Breeders use antibiotics and drugs in the farms, even though under control of a veterinarian. The conclusion? The beasts do not eat natural food. This is another violence towards animals.
I agree that the above mentioned issues are horrible habits, therefore more inspections should be done about the poor condition of the livestock farming. This situation has obviously created in all of us a great sense of sadness, but we are humans and our natural diet is mainly built by proteins. We can solve partly this question breeding animals in a traditional way. Animals could be raised in an old style farmer or in a large open space and even if It is sure that killing animals is horrible, their life will be less cruel than now.
I agree that breeding animals in our modern farms is cruel but in some ways necessary. In my opinion we can improve the animals life conditions breeding them in large spaces and using a natural diet. In conclusion, we can raise our beasts in a traditional and less cruel way.
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People should never eat meat because raising animals for human consumption is cruel.
Public opinion tells us more and more that breeding animals for human consumption is a bad habit and I agree in part with this opinion. On one hand, livestock is breeding in a small space and is usually raised with antibiotics and drugs, but on the other hand, human beings are omnivorous, therefore we should eat meat. In my opinion, we can try raising* animals in traditional ways like our grandfathers did.We raise our livestock in farms which gather too many animals in little space. In these places cattle do not do any kind of activity and there is not any possibility to go about freely in the countryside. Farms are a kind of prison for animals and this is very brutal and sad.
Nowadays, the increasing of the population all over the world requires more food which pushes the farmers to rise their production. How does modern society answer this huge request? Breeders use antibiotics and drugs in the farms, even though under control of a veterinarian. The conclusion? The beasts do not eat natural food. This is another violence towards animals.
I agree that the above mentioned issues are horrible habits, therefore more inspections should be done because of the poor condition of the livestock farming. This situation has obviously created in all of us a great sense of sadness, but we are humans and our natural diet is mainly built by proteins. We can partly solve this question by breeding animals in a traditional way. Animals could be raised in an old style farm or in a large open space and even if It is sure that killing animals is horrible, their life will be less cruel than now.
I agree that breeding animals in our modern farms is cruel but in some ways necessary. In my opinion we can improve the animals living conditions breeding them in large spaces and using a natural diet. In conclusion, we can raise our beasts in a traditional and less cruel way.
[* Or: "we can try to raise".]
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Sandi, I appreciate a lot your clarification...
I came from Italy .....
I wrote this essay only to do practice on writing... whitout take care of the content of it
...anyway I don't like too much any kind of livestock farming..
I hope that the IELS examiner does not check whether I wrote abstract ideas...
(Think...usually I don't eat meat...)
See you... and thanks very much....
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I have not had time to correct this but it depends on which country you come from as to what the welfare standards are for farm animals. I have worked in the farming community in the UK and we have one of the highest standards of animal welfare in the world. You should state what evidence you have for making this statement
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