IELTS writting task
The two graphs demonstrate the main reason for study in different age students and the amount of financial support the students received from employers.
Overall, the number of students study for career and for interest were in inverse proportion among the age. There was 80 percent of people under 26 years old study for career while only 10 percent of people study for interest. People study for career steadily decreased, and as same as people study for interest in the age 40-49 group(40 percent). In the age over 49 group, the percentage of people study for career fell to 18 percent. The percentage of people study for interest steadily rose from 10 percent and reached to 70 percent over the age. According to the second graph, the support by employer was 60 percent in the group of age under 26. It declined to 30 percent in the age 30-39 group, and then increased steadily to 40 percent in the age over 49 group.
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IELTS writting task
The two graphs demonstrate the main reason for study(ing) in different aged students and the amount of financial support the students received from employers.Overall, the number of students studying for a career and for interest, were in inverse proportion among to the age. There was 80 percent of people under 26 years old of age study for a career while only 10 percent of people study for interest. People studying for a career steadily decreased, and which is the as same as people studying for interest in the age 40-49 age group(40 percent). In the age over 49 age group, the percentage of people studying for a career fell to 18 percent. The percentage of people studying for interest steadily rose from 10 percent and reached to 70 percent over the age group. According to The second graph shows the support by the employer was 60 percent in the group of age under 26 of age. It declined to 30 percent in the age 30-39 age group, and then increased steadily to 40 percent in the age over 49 and over age group.
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