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    We need to train our skills up all the time

    Today I listened one was listening to a melody at my work during while I was making a drawing. As soon as Ever since I first heard this melody at for the first time I have dreamed to play of playing it on violin. I realy really love it but actually I've  never played it on violin. I played it on  the piano when I was a child. Since then Now I can't play. I mean I didn't haven't had  any practice since those times then, and that's why I can't play now.
    One day I want to come get back my piano playing skills in piano. Who knows, maybe after that I'll be able to begin something new.
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    July 10, 2018
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    A treacherous Sunday!

    Hello everybody,

    I've not been practicing I haven't practiced my English since  for a long time, but so I'm here to start from scratch. My day was not so good. It was kind of treacherous. My Sunday started at 7:00. I woke up very early because of the FIFA World Cup. I love soccer too much, so I am trying to watch all the matches. I watched three matches today: Costa Rica vs Serbia, Mexico vs Germany and Brazil vs Switzerland. I liked Mexico vs Germany the most. It was so exciting because of the way Mexico faced the last World Cup Champion. Mexico was not afraid of the German team. They knew it was going to be difficult, but it that didn't mean IMPOSSIBLE. They got it done!! Moving on ... Personally, I didn't like the way Brazil played today. It was not the Brazilian team of the Qualifiers. Although Switzerland did their business, Brazil didn't take advantage of the chances they had.

    After watching the matches, I played soccer with my friends. I had played been playing for around 40 mins then when we take took a rest of 10 mins.  ten minute break. When the rest time break was over I stand stood up to go to the pitch, but I felt a little pain on in my left leg. I didn't pay attention to that it. However, as I tried to get a ball from my mate when I felt that the pain become stronger. I couldn't move for a couples of minutes and then I left the pitch.The pain was increasing after some increased for several minutes until I get  got home and I take took some medicine. I don't know what happened because I didn't feel anything while playing. Anyway, I hope I can get I'll be well until the better by next weekend.

    Thank you for your time!

    Regards!
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    June 18, 2018
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    IMAGINE YO YOU HAD NO INTERNET FOR A WEEK

    If i I had no internet for a week it would be a very long week. The internet is very useful for me in my diary daily routine. I need it for my job, I could not work without internet. For my personal entertainment, for example I watch TV though Netflix and HBO and in addition it makes me easy my personal life much easier, for instance, I have no time to go to the bank, but I can do all my transactions on the internet, it´s amazing!
    If I had no internet for a week, I would read more books, I would be doing more exercise because sometimes I lose several a lot of  time on social media (Facebook, twitter) and I´m sure I would have more time to relax. However if I have  had to choose I would prefer to have Internet.



    This is very well-written.

    A few comments:

    When you use the word "time" to describe the duration of  an activity it is usually a non-count (or mass) noun, so you can't use "many" or "several" in front of it. 

    "I can't work without internet" sounds better to me than "I could not work without internet.

    "I would be getting more exercise" sounds better to me than "I would be doing more exercise"

    but what you wrote is correct and understandable in both cases.

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    June 3, 2018
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    Working on a Composition

    The most interesting thing in my profession that I like to work on is the composition. It mostly concerns non-dramatic texts, such as prose, poetry or myths. Having these texts as unstructered from dramatic point of view, you ought to create not only a performance, but also the new dramatic structure.

    Sometimes it is quite difficult to do. I call this genre a theatrical opus. Such kind of work gives you some advantures along with difficulties. First, you can create some more episodes that you need. You can also use a montage as an active instrument, mounting time and space in different combinations. You can find a theatrical language that will be more complex and unpredictable than it has been ever before. Your thought and idea can be released out of a linear cage of the written play and become really authentic.


    The thing I that I find most interesting in my profession, and that I most like working on, is composition. Mostly I am concerned with non-dramatic text, such as prose, poetry or myths. Since these texts are unstructured from a dramatic point of view, one needs to create not only a performance, but an entirely new dramatic structure. 

    Sometimes this is quite difficult to do. I call this genre a theatrical opus. This type of work can be an adventure  but it comes with many difficulties. First, you can create more episodes than you need. You can also use a montage as an active instrument, mounting time and space in different combinations. You can find a  theatrical language that is more complex and unpredictable than it has ever been before. Your thoughts and ideas can be released from the linear cage of the written play and become truly authentic.



    Possibly you intended "First you must create more episodes than you need."

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    May 28, 2018
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    In US English "art gallery" would usually mean a private gallery where the pieces are for sale, and "art museum" would usually refer to a public space where the pieces are on display for the education and entertainment of the visitors.
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    May 26, 2018
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    About my dog.

    Hello everybody.
    Every day I wake up early in the morning and go out to walk with my dog. It's It can be rains raining, hot, froz freezing, or anything else. It doesn't matter because I love my doggy :-)
    But sometimes I think that my dog hate hates me because it doesn't won't let me sleeps sleep. It can start to jump on me in at 5 a.m. Yes, I wake up, put on the clothes and go outsite outside. When I come get outside and look back I don't see the dog. I come back home and see......my dog sleeps sleeping  in my bed near my wife. I think in the so that moment - F***  F***ing dog!!!!


    I like the story. I have owned a dog like yours.

    In US English I think it's more common to say "walk my dog" rather than "walk with my dog". There's a subtle difference between the two phrases. The first indicates that you have control of the animal, while the second suggests that the two of you are more equal.

    People do use the word "it" to describe animals, but most pet owners would use the words "he" or "she" for their pets, rather than "it".

    There's nothing incorrect about the phrase "I think in that moment", but it would probably be more usual to write something like "I think to myself".

    Where I've added "It doesn't matter because" you could also use "It makes no difference because" or "I don't mind because" or even "The weather doesn't stop me because". "Put on clothes" is also completely correct. Perhaps a bit more common would be "get dressed".

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    May 24, 2018
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    WRITE A FOR AND AGAINST ESSAY

    WHAT YOU LEARN AT SCHOOL AND HIGH SCHOOL IS NOT PRACTICAL FOR YOUR EVERYDAY LIFE

    It is widely known that E education is the most important legacy that you can have in your life. Along  During your life you will have the most important "teachers" you have will be in your home and at the in your schools. It seems to me that elementary school and high-school  is  high school are practical for your everyday life.
    The main and firstly   first and main reason is that your personality is formed  in the first six years of life, needless to say that  so clearly school has a very important role in this period of time.
    Secondly, in my view and in my personal experience, at the in primary school and in the high-school high school you will probably do meet your better lifelong friends. For instance, ny my best friends nowadays (today, right now) are the same than  as they were twenty years ago, I met them in the high-school  high school.
    Thirdly, when you are a child you learn to write, to read and all the rest of the  basic knowledges about maths, science, art, literature...however, I have forgotten several knowledges which much of the  knowledge that I learned at the high-school. in high school.
    In conclusion I think school is practical for your everyday life and that is the reason why   that I am (currently) a teacher nowadays , despite the fact that I hated the school when I was a child.


    The words grade school, elementary school, and primary school are all used to describe the first 5 or 6 years of schooling in the US. Other words are used in other English speaking countries. In US English "math" is never plural. You've used "nowadays" several times. It could be replaced with  "currently", "presently", or even "right now" or "today", which I've tried to indicate.

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    May 23, 2018
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    DO YOU THINK THAT MEN AND WOMEN CAN DO THINGS EQUALLY WELL?

    Nowadays women and men are similar although there is a move movement called "Feminism". Feminism is not the oposite opposite of sexism, it is a move movement  intended to reclaim the equal equality between women and men. Women an and men can work in the same works  jobs , for instance, taxi drivers, plane pilots, chefs, directors, teachers, doctors. However, frequently women earn less money than men and in my opinion, this situation is unfair. In addition, we can practice  play the same kinds of sports (soccer, basketball, volley-ball), but if you are a professional sport athlete and you are a woman probably you  you probably will earn less money and you will be less popular than a man, why?
    We have the same knowlegdes   knowledge , similar capacities and habylities abilities,  perhaps and our only an evident difference is that they men are stronger than woman.
    In conclusion, I think women have a long fight ahead  to get the reach equality between women and men.

    Thank you for your help
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    May 23, 2018
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