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About my dog.
Hello everybody.Every day I wake up early in the morning and go out to walk with my dog. It's can be raining, hot, freezing, or anything. It doesn't matter because I love my doggy :-)
But sometimes I think that my dog hates me because it doesn't let me sleeps. It can start to jump on me in at 5 a.m. Yes, I wake up, put on the clothes and go outside. When I come out and look back, I don't see the dog. I come back home and see my dog sleeping in my bed near my wife. I think in the so that moment - F*** you, dog!!!!
About my dog.
Hello everybody.Every day I wake up early in the morning and go out to walk with my dog. It's It can be rains raining, hot, froz freezing, or anything else. It doesn't matter because I love my doggy :-)
But sometimes I think that my dog hate hates me because it doesn't won't let me sleeps sleep. It can start to jump on me in at 5 a.m. Yes, I wake up, put on the clothes and go outsite outside. When I come get outside and look back I don't see the dog. I come back home and see......my dog sleeps sleeping in my bed near my wife. I think in the so that moment - F*** F***ing dog!!!!
I like the story. I have owned a dog like yours.
In US English I think it's more common to say "walk my dog" rather than "walk with my dog". There's a subtle difference between the two phrases. The first indicates that you have control of the animal, while the second suggests that the two of you are more equal.
People do use the word "it" to describe animals, but most pet owners would use the words "he" or "she" for their pets, rather than "it".
There's nothing incorrect about the phrase "I think in that moment", but it would probably be more usual to write something like "I think to myself".
Where I've added "It doesn't matter because" you could also use "It makes no difference because" or "I don't mind because" or even "The weather doesn't stop me because". "Put on clothes" is also completely correct. Perhaps a bit more common would be "get dressed".
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