IMAGINE YO HAD NO INTERNET FOR A WEEK If i had no internet for a week it would be a very long week. The internet is very useful for me in my diary routine. I need it for my job, I could not work witho

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Verónica Fuentes

IMAGINE YO HAD NO INTERNET FOR A WEEK If i had no internet for a week it would be a very long week. The internet is very useful for me in my diary routine. I need it for my job, I could not work without internet. For my personal entertainment, for example I watch TV though Netflix and HBO and in addition it makes me easy my personal life, for instance, I have no time to go to the bank, but I can do all my transactions on the internet, it´s amazing! If I had no internet for a week, I would read more books, I would doing more exercise because sometimes I lose several time on social media (Facebook, twitter) and I´m sure I would have more time to relax. However if I have to choose I prefer to have Internet.

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IMAGINE YO YOU HAD NO INTERNET FOR A WEEK

If i I had no internet for a week it would be a very long week. The internet is very useful for me in my diary daily routine. I need it for my job, I could not work without internet. For my personal entertainment, for example I watch TV though Netflix and HBO and in addition it makes me easy my personal life much easier, for instance, I have no time to go to the bank, but I can do all my transactions on the internet, it´s amazing!
If I had no internet for a week, I would read more books, I would be doing more exercise because sometimes I lose several a lot of time on social media (Facebook, twitter) and I´m sure I would have more time to relax. However if I have had to choose I would prefer to have Internet.

This is very well-written.

A few comments:

When you use the word "time" to describe the duration of an activity it is usually a non-count (or mass) noun, so you can't use "many" or "several" in front of it.

"I can't work without internet" sounds better to me than "I could not work without internet.

"I would be getting more exercise" sounds better to me than "I would be doing more exercise"

but what you wrote is correct and understandable in both cases.

If I had no internet for a week it would be a very long week. The internet is very useful for me in my dailyroutine. I need it for my job, I could not work without internet. For my personal entertainment, for example I watch TV though Netflix and HBO and in addition it makes me easy my personal life, for instance, I have no time to go to the bank, but I can do all my transactions on the internet, it´s amazing! If I had no internet for a week, I would read more books, I would doing more exercise because sometimes I lose a lot of time on social media (Facebook, twitter) and I´m sure I would have more time to relax. However if I have to choose I prefer to have Internet.

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