I like to listen to music on the road Please help me correct my answer to following question. And I want to know what words could use to replaced"sometimes". I used it repeatedly but I can't find a suitable words to replace it. Thank you!

Some people like listening to music when they are going from one place to another, while other people are not fond of this. Which one do you prefer and why? Please include specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Sometimes I listen to the music on the road and sometimes I don’t. I have to ride my bike to school back and forth every day for about an hour. Music kills time and enriches my emotions. I can’t really focus on any academic subjects on the road, so listen some music help me relax is the best choice. I listen to music on an app called NetEase Music, it is very popular app in China now. Sometimes I listen to the music this app recommend everyday, sometimes I just pick a few song from my favorite list that I want to hear the most.

But under several condition I don’t listening music on the road. First , I really like some music and I want to appreciate it quietly and intently. I don’t want distract by any other factors. Another condition is that I’m exhausted and I need to take a rest on the car. Sometimes I go to school by car because of terrible weather. Then I would rather take a rest and not listen to music. And sometimes I’m just simply not in the mood, I just feel I don’t need music now, I want to blank my mind on the road and I don’t want to think about anything.

What contents should contain in five paragraph essay? This is a brief summary about our yesterday’s academic writing class. Please help me check the grammar mistakes in this brief summary and help me optimize the sentence structure and transition in this article if it’s possible. Thank you!

Yesterday our introduced us the five paragraph essay. It contains

Introduction&thesis :

In the introduction paragraph , you should contain a hook to catches reader’s attention. And express the thesis statement combine with examples, in most condition we restricted in 3 thesis. Also through your thesis statement , reader should find out your stance about this topic.

Body paragraph:

Body paragraph is where you explain your opinion in detail help reader to understand you statement. It should contain topic sentences which is a statement for your thesis, and this sentence should be the first sentence of the paragraph. And at the end of the paragraph , you could restate your opinion again, but a better way to do this is build transition to next paragraph.

Conclusion:

Basically you restate all your thesis again in the conclusion gives a summary to the readers help them remember your thesis better. But you better arrange it different form the way you say it in the introduction paragraph to diversify your essay.

My favorite foods Please help me check and correct this short paragraph. Thank you!

I like many kinds of food, it is impossible to list all of them in this short paragraph. I’m just going to list a few of them.

First of all, I have fond on Japanese food. Sushi, Japanese Ramen, Japanese curry and plenty of other desserts. Japanese food always have both good tastes and good look. Most of Japanese food are fresh and tasty, and often delicate too .

And as a Chinese , I also have many favorites from my homeland. One of my favorite is spring roll. It is the size about a glue stick.The crunchy wrapper with juicy stuffing，the one just came out of oil with hot steam are the best.

Another one is Lanzhou noodles. It is not just regular noodles. It is kind of noodles with slices of beef and with many Lanzhou special spices. And put the noodles and beef in the soup that already been cooked for hours. When you have a bowl of Lanzhou noodles, you will feel full of energy.

I screwed my monthly test! Please help me check and correct this paragraph. Thank you! If it’s possible , you can provide me some tips for math study too! Thanks again!

Ahhhhhhhh! I just screwed my math monthly test this afternoon ! Math is one of my biggest problem. It is really frustrating when you keep getting unbelievable low grade on one subject even you already spend plenty of painful time on it . What more upsets me is that my classmates always yelling after test“Ah! I’m screwed! I’m done!” But they eventually get a pretty high scores maybe with few mistakes. But when I said “I’m screwed” I mean what literally mean, like only get 40%scores.

Well ,part of reasons I keep getting low grade on math because I started to learning math from 2016, I didn’t learn math from 3rd grade to 9th grade for some special reasons. I started late than my classmates. But still, I really want to get better on this subject. It is a really important subject in school, it will effect my application for college. And it is also a fundamental subject of natural science. I hope I’ll do better on my final. Wish me good luck!

In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than today? Please help me check and correct this short paragraph. Thank you!

I don’t think so. Cars nowadays are the important transportation tool for medium-to-long distance travel. For now it’s hard to find some substitute to replace it. Although the technology is developing , scientists just keep finding a more environmental friendly way to use the car instead of finding a new tool to replace it. So it is hard to believe this kind of tool will emerge in twenty years later. Another important fact is the population growth on earth. The population of human is increasing in exponential ways. There will be much more people on earth than now. As the results, the demand for the transportation tool will increase too. So if there no new way for transportation, people will still buy the car and the total number of car will increase. In conclusion , the number of car seems less likely fewer than today in twenty years later.

Is maintain old friends more important than making new friends? Please help me check and correct this short paragraph. Thank you!

I doubt it. I do get many benefit and pleasure from my old friendship , and I love to maintain it. But it is almost impossible not to making new friend when you entering a new environment. Making new friend help you fit in new environment better, gives you new sight about the world. On the other hand , the old friends couldn’t become our old friends if we didn’t start to making new friends. Therefore making new friends is very important. However it’s true that friendship become more solid and reliable as time pass. We lose some friend because we didn’t touch for long time. So keep interacting with old friend are also important .

Anyway if we emphasize both quality and quantity of friendship, making new friend and maintain old friend are both important. It’s hard to put one on the top of another.

A homework assignment Please help me check and corret these two paragraphs. It's about giving summary to two short video. Thank you!