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My favorite foods Please help me check and correct this short paragraph. Thank you!

I like many kinds of food, it is impossible to list all of them in this short paragraph. I’m just going to list a few of them.

First of all, I have fond on Japanese food. Sushi, Japanese Ramen, Japanese curry and plenty of other desserts. Japanese food always have both good tastes and good look. Most of Japanese food are fresh and tasty, and often delicate too .

And as a Chinese , I also have many favorites from my homeland. One of my favorite is spring roll. It is the size about a glue stick.The crunchy wrapper with juicy stuffing,the one just came out of oil with hot steam are the best.

Another one is Lanzhou noodles. It is not just regular noodles. It is kind of noodles with slices of beef and with many Lanzhou special spices. And put the noodles and beef in the soup that already been cooked for hours. When you have a bowl of Lanzhou noodles, you will feel full of energy.

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My favorite food

Please help me check and correct this short paragraph. Thank you!

I like many kinds of food, it is impossible to list all of them in this short paragraph. I’m just going to list a few of them.

First of all, I have fond on  of Japanese food:  Sushi, Japanese Ramen, Japanese curry and plenty of other desserts. Japanese food always have both good tastes and good look. Most of Japanese food are fresh and tasty, and often delicate too .

And as a Chinese , I also have many favorites from my homeland. One of my favorite is "Spring Roll". It is the size about a glue stick.The crunchy wrapper with juicy stuffing,the one just came out of oil with hot steam are the best.

Another one is " Lanzhou Noodles" . It is not just regular noodles. It is kind of noodles with slices of beef and with many Lanzhou special spices. A and put the noodles and beef in the soup that have been cooked for hours. When you have a bowl of Lanzhou noodles, you will feel full of energy.

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My favorite foods

Please help me check and correct this short paragraph. Thank you!

I like many kinds of food, it is impossible to list all of them in this short paragraph. I’m just going to list a few of them.

First of all, I have fond of Japanese food such as sushi, Japanese Ramen, Japanese curry and plenty of other desserts. Japanese food always have both good tastes and good look. Most of Japanese food are fresh and tasty, and often delicate too .

And as a Chinese , I also have many favorites from my homeland. One of my favorite is spring roll. It is the size about a glue stick.The crunchy wrapper with juicy stuffing,the one just came out of oil with hot steam are the best.

Another one is Lanzhou noodles. It is not just regular noodles. It is kind of noodles with slices of beef and with many Lanzhou special spices. And put the noodles and beef in the soup that already been cooked for hours. When you have a bowl of Lanzhou noodles, you will feel full of energy.

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