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I prefer to dress casual clothes at school Please help me check and correct the mistakes in following paragraph. Thank you!

I prefer to dress casual for the following reasons. First, uniforms make students look in order, but it also cut down student’s personality. Clothes is a very good way to show the world who you are, school should’t stop students to demonstrate their own identity. Second, uniform are not very comfortable. Especially the formal suits, it feels rough and stiff, that’s kind of distract you when you’re trying to study and it is also very inconvenient for the PE class. Also, school uniform is a unnecessary expenditure. We have to spend 2000RMB on uniform when we entered the school. But why should we spend that much money to buy some uncomfortable clothes when we already have that many?

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I prefer to dress in casual clothes at school

Please help me check and correct the mistakes in following paragraph. Thank you!

I prefer to dress in casual for the following reasons:  First, uniforms make students look orderly, but it also cuts down affects the students' personalities. Clothes are a very good way to show the world who you are and school shouldn’t stop students from demonstrating their own identity. Second, uniforms are not very comfortable. Especially the formal suits. They feel rough and stiff and  it kind of distracts you when you’re trying to study and it is also very inconvenient for the PE class. Also, school uniforms are an unnecessary expenditure. We have to spend 2000RMB on a uniform when we start school. But why should we spend that much money to buy some uncomfortable clothes when we already have that so many?

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Great text! We had to dress in blue at school until I was 14. When we stopped using uniforms school just went on as normal ! (Then it was the kids who created their uniform!!)

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校服是怕你们攀比，你让穷学生买不起好衣服的怎么办。

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