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Is maintain old friends more important than making new friends? Please help me check and correct this short paragraph. Thank you!

I doubt it. I do get many benefit and pleasure from my old friendship , and I love to maintain it. But it is almost impossible not to making new friend when you entering a new environment. Making new friend help you fit in new environment better, gives you new sight about the world. On the other hand , the old friends couldn’t become our old friends if we didn’t start to making new friends. Therefore making new friends is very important. However it’s true that friendship become more solid and reliable as time pass. We lose some friend because we didn’t touch for long time. So keep interacting with old friend are also important .

Anyway if we emphasize both quality and quantity of friendship, making new friend and maintain old friend are both important. It’s hard to put one on the top of another.

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Please help me check and correct this short paragraph. Thank you!

I get many benefits and joys from my old friends and I love to maintain it. But it is almost impossible not to make new partners when you get in a new environment. Making new friends helps you fit better in new place and it gives you new sights of the world. On the other hand, our old friends couldn’t become our old fellows if we haven’t started meeting new people. Therefore, making new friends is very important. However, it’s true that a friendship becomes more solid and reliable as time passes. We may lose some friends if we don’t get in touch with them for a long time. So keeping in touch with old friends is also important.

Anyway if we emphasize both quality and quantity of friendship, making new friends and keeping old friends are both important. It’s hard to put one on the top of another.

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Nice text, Ada. I'm sure a native English speaker would give you much better tips
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Nice text, Ada. I'm sure a native English speaker would give you much better tips

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