Writing - An Essay

Is it better to visit places in your own country or a foreign country when you go on holiday?

Nowadays, many countries are considered the best place to visit in the world because you can find them enjoyable aspects such as culture, nature, food and the most important their people. that The people create a particular atmosphere not matter if it is your country or not. However, you will find advantages and disadvantages on them.

If you are a person that has visited the most famous places in your country, maybe you don't find them you might not find those places interesting. and If you are interested in visiting foreign tourist places, or maybe you may want to stay in a place where the culture is totally different.

Unfortunately, some countries can be expensive. tThe main reason is the currency, in comparison with the country that you live in. On the other hand, you can find different offers or discounts for the place that you want to visit.

In my opinion, I consider that each country has characteristics and aspects that make to them interesting, so you only need to explore them and discover which aspects you are interested in.

Great job! My comments are just suggestions that I believe would make your writing easier to read. I am not an expert.

Unusual weather

Getting warmer and warmer is happy for me I am happy when it gets warmer and warmer, but recently I think it's has been too hot compared to the time of the year previous years in Japan, I think. I hear it will be near 30 degrees today. It must be an usual unusual weather. It may make our town cause our town to a lack of wafer water and create mountain fires as a result of these unusual weather. I'm worried about keep it continuing from now too.
I plan to enjoy my various hobbies during Golden Week (Golden Week is a Japanese holiday which will start on the end of this month to May 6th of this year), but I hope it will be a warm and a nice day on that term.

A formal letter.

Dear Mr. Groves,

I have seen your advertisement in my local English- language newspaper and I would like to apply as a volunteer at for the four-day international pop and rock music festival.

I am a 22-year-old musician and I'm really into rock music. I can play several instruments, including drums, bass, and electric guitar. I am also a member of a rock band called ' The Hunna'. I am not the lead singer, but I play the drums and do the chorus.

Although I have no experience working with other people, I think it would be a great opportunity to pass on my skills on to other people . I consider myself as a kind person and I wouldn't have any problem to teaching people how to play the instruments I play, or give them some giving advise about what they should or shouldn't do while they are on stage.

I would benefit from the concert by gaining knowledge about how to work with other people. I feel I would be well-suited to be a volunteer, as I am a very calm and patient person. My life is devoted to music and I would love to have the opportunity to twach watch people who love music as well.

I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerily
Renata.