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1984 Orwell vision of the future I feel ungry because the Orwell's vision of the future are possible. There are some things are real now. Not in extrem about the book, but something are similars. Anothers things are ridiculod because they are not real. For example, there won't be art or literature, all cultures have are and literature (oral or writing)

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1984 is one of my favorite books! Have you read Animal Farm as well?
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The 1984 Orwell vision of the future

I feel ungry angry because the Orwell's vision ("the Orwellian vision" or even "the Orwell vision" are alternatives) of the future are is (must be "is" to match "vison") possible. There are some things which are real now. Not in extrem about to the extreme of the book, but something some things (plural of "something" is "some things") are similars similar. Anothers Other ("Another" is for singular nouns.  "Another" is a compound of "an" + "other" or "one other".  "Other" is suitable for plural nouns.)  things are ridiculod ridiculous because they are not real realistic ("Realistic" with means "like reality" makes more sense here.  "To be not realistic" means "to be inconsistent with reality".  "Not real" simply means not existing.  The predictions in Orwell's novel are automatically not real because they occur in the future.) . For example, Orwell claims there won't be art or literature, but all cultures have are art and literature (oral or writing)

(Very nice!  This might look like a lot of corrections, but it's longer explanations more than lots of corrections.  The writing itself was clear.  The was one repeated issue though: singular/plural agreement problems occurred a couple of times.)

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1984 Orwell vision of the future

I feel ungry angry because the Orwell's vision of the future are is possible. There are some things that are real now. Not in extrem about They are not as extreme as inthe book, but some things are similars. AnoOthers things are ridiculodus because they are not real. F; ror example,: there won't be art or literature, .  aAll cultures have art and literature (oral or writingwritten).
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1984 Orwellian vision of the future

I feel angry because Orwell's vision of the future is possible. There are some things in it that are real now; not so extreme as in the book, but some things are similar. Other things are ridiculous because they are not real. For example, that there won't be art or literature. All cultures have art and literature (oral or writing).

double plus good writing!

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