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A formal letter. Dear Mr. Groves, I have seen your advertisement in my local English- language newspaper and I would like to apply as a volunteer at the four-day international pop and rock music festival. I am a 22-year-old musician and I'm really into rock music. I can play several instruments, including drums, bass and electric guitar. I am also a member of a rock band called ' The Hunna'. I am not the lead singer, but I play the drums and do the chorus. Although I have no experience working with other people, I think it would be a great opportunity to pass on my skills on other people . I consider myself as a kind person and I wouldn't have any problem to teach people how to play the instruments I play, or give them some advise about what they should or shouldn't do while they are on stage. I would benefit from the concert by gaining knowledge about how to work with other people. I feel I would be well-suited to be a volunteer, as I am a very calm and patient person. My life is devoted to music and I would love to have the opportunity to twach people who love music as well. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerily Renata.

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I love your passion. You seem extremely devoted to music which is really legit. Good luck on your endeavors!
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A formal letter.

Dear Mr. Groves,

I have seen your advertisement in my local English- language newspaper and I would like to apply as a volunteer at for the four-day international pop and rock music festival.

I am a 22-year-old musician and I'm really into rock music. I can play several instruments, including drums, bass, and electric guitar. I am also a member of a rock band called ' The Hunna'. I am not the lead singer, but I play the drums and do the chorus.

Although I have no experience working with other people, I think it would be a great opportunity to pass on my skills on to other people . I consider myself as a kind person and I wouldn't have any problem to teaching people how to play the instruments I play, or give them some giving advise about what they should or shouldn't do while they are on stage.

I would benefit from the concert by gaining knowledge about how to work with other people. I feel I would be well-suited to be a volunteer, as I am a very calm and patient person. My life is devoted to music and I would love to have the opportunity to twach watch people who love music as well.

I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerily
Renata.

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